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Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg u need to update i really like ur fic but im bored waiting for an update but its a great fic though so UPDATE ALREADY
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 13:03 CDT
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aWSOEM STORY. PLEASE UPDATE? POR FAVOR ... aww shit. sorry aboutthe caps locks. I know how annoyign that can be,,,
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 09:26 CDT
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Very good. You just need to space it out more. When a person speaks, it's a new paragraph. And then if someone else speaks, it starts another paragraph. It makes it a lot easier to read. Good grammar and spelling. I applaud you on that. Good storyline. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: coarse dareei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the fic! Their relationship is really quite interesting...lol. Well I hope you continue soon because it's getting really interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing some drama between Inuyasha, Kagome, and Kouga...welps write soon!
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Reviewed By: Ai no Kami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I...honestly liked this fic...And I'm going to wait for more on it too! You should hurry and write more! I love this fic to death! I'm waiting! Don't make me wait any longer! T_T
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Reviewed By: WHYISNTKIKYODEADYET On: July 07, 2005 13:03 CDT
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YAY FOR STORIES ABOUT KAGOM/INUYASHA! KEEP GOIN' WITH PLEASES AND THANK YOUS!!!
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Reviewed By: ~Maggie~ On: July 06, 2005 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the first chapter! I actually read it more than once! Kagome's sense of humor is rather amusing and I like how she can put up with what Inuyasha throws her way. Too bad what happened to her, though, poor girl! At least Sango's there to help out! ^^ I wanna read another chapter and find out more about this "relationship" of theirs. They didn't act like they were anything then BLAM! Anyways, amusing and entertaining! Keep it up hun and I'll keep reading!
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Reviewed By: jodibetz On: July 03, 2005 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really really good!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this first chappie was so good. i love the behind-the-scenes relationship kag and inu have going on. very exciting. i'm also reading your fic "prisoner" tho i'm not caught up to the last post yet. i'm tired and i HAVE to sleep. i will catch up tomorrow. you're a very talented author, and i'm looking forward to updates!!! when you have the time, please do so. thanx.
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Reviewed By: alex20 On: June 30, 2005 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: milady On: June 30, 2005 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was very good, I hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: frostyshake On: June 29, 2005 22:57 CDT
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Good start. Your story is well written and I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: fionamalory [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 21:44 CDT
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Well, you've certainly got me hooked! Can't wait for more. And I agree with Kagome, Mondays suck. *g*
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Reviewed By: Rachel1330 On: June 29, 2005 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. Keep the updates coming, and i'll keep r&r-ing ~Rachel
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: June 29, 2005 20:34 CDT
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whoa am I the first to review?that makes me special. this seems like a really good beginning to a great story. please update soon.
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