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Title: Heart of Darkness
Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 12:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I love how you altered the encounter with Musou. You made it fit very nicely with the rest of the story. Good luck with the next chapter. ~QueenTatooine
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Reviewed By: kokoro no miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 08:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing job! Not only is your take on established events more than a little interesting, but your lemons are especially hot & juicy as well. Sorry I haven't reviewed now, but I just read this thing over the past 2 days, and simply couldn't tear myself away long enough for more than the bare necessities of life. I'm absolutely loving the contrasts between the characters' past and future selves, although I have nothing but sympathy for the pure hell Yashita's had to live through. And Mama taking up with a youkai--! I was in absolute stitches reading this. Congrats on the awards from both the Feudal Association and the IYFG--they are certainly well-deserved, and I'm hoping for a speedy update!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DO DO DOOOM! Ah the intensity of the battle. It seems things are at a breaking point right now. I can't wait for the climax!
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Title: Weakness
Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I am afraid I have no helpful criticms. Good luck with the next chapter. ~QueenTatooine
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 21:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure if I have reviewed or not, my memory isn't very good. But I have to say that I have been an avid reader. Honestly I started rereading it just for entertainment. This story is so original and well written, that I can't help but compare it with the greats such as the "The Lucky Ones" & "Temple of the Dog". I simply love these epic novel style stories. I hope you continue to amaze us in the future, I know that I can expect great things from you. If I don't get a chance to review again let me just say that it has truely been a pleasure reading this wonderful tale. Thank you for sharing your vision.
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Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 08:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Very good job in writing this. I do wonder how it would be to know your mom is marrying someone you met when they were a kid. I mean I know he is 500 years older and all but still, it would be a little bit akward (I know this is spelled wrong) at first. At least she has plenty of time to get used to the idea. Good luck with the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 01:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh lordy lords. I've been so busy that I didn't have time to read all the new updates. So what do you think I've been doing for the last 48 hours or so...yeah...sitting here engrossed as the drama unfolds. I can't believe everything that has happened. I absolutely love where Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is now, that unspoken understanding and love. So powerful. Kagome has been so fiery! Love, love, love it! I have to admit though as the final battle draws nearer I swear my heart is breaking for both of the Inuyasha's and Kagome's future forced seperation. AHH so much excitement and drama. I'm never going to be able to sleep tonight! As always your writing is absolutely wonderful. I can't wait to see what devilishness you have yet to unleash ;)
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Reviewed By: Crysalie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 11:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter, Fenik! ^_^ I loved all the sweet moments, but I especially found the whole 'panty' incident entertaining. Can't say that'll help Yashita, but it was amusing to read. ;) Great job!
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Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 08:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been really bad about reviewing this story. I have not stopped reading though. I love how this is going and how things are happening. You have some wonderful adaptations of events that take place in the series along with new events of your own creation. Good job. ~QueenTatooine
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 22:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me five times to try and read this chapter, dammit, lol. If my phone rings one more time....UGH! I finally did get to read it and it was great. Kept wondering how Kags was gonna work this out between her and both her Inu's. One thing I didnt understand: it was mentioned when she listened to Yashita's heartbeat, it was just a half beat off of hers. Now I know they were insync before, so what happened now that they're not? Heh, I know the answers there, I just cant figure it out, lol. Maybe it was the the centuries? Or perhaps the five times I got interrupted, lol. I dunno, but I do know it was awexcellent. And test drive you say? :D
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 21:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, congrats on your wins. You deserve it. But great chapter. Loved the interaction between Kagome and Lord Sessaki. Then Yashita...*wonders what Yash-centric has in mind* :P As for Sephiroth, I wonder how he would stack up against our Gorgeous Hunk of a Hanyou, InuYasha. Or even Sessh. That would be very interesting. OH, and have a good time with all the girls, am so glad its not my ears, lol. Have a good one and update when you can.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Angelic Ice Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap, when I had to stop reading this story becuse the stupid intrnet cut out on me you were at chapter 44. Now that I can finaly come back your all the way up to 51. You must do a lot of wrighting. I am looking forward to reading the new posts. This is a great story and I love the fact that Kagome can kick a$$ along side Inu-Yasha and even do a better job than him. It's just cooool. Any hoo I'm gonna go and read some of your new posts. see ya. Angelic Ice Dragon
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Reviewed By: Crysalie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 17:58 PDT
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Oh, my freakin' gosh! *Fans face* That whole confrontation between Inuyasha and Kagome was intense! Though I am definitely glad it ended pleasantly. *waggles eyebrows* I must say, you wrote it beautifully and artisically! :D I swear, though, you are seriously going to kill me if there isn't some major Yashita/Kagome action soon... :P Heh...I just love this Strong Kagome, being able to tell off the almighty Lord Sesshomaru! :D Oh, and Congrats on receiving those two awards for the Feudal Association! Hey, perhaps soon you'll have a few more to proudly wave around...IYFG voting is approaching soon...Anyways, take care! :D
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Title: Congratulations!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 21:51 PDT
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Your story has won First Place for Best Lemon from the Feudal Association. Your award can be found here - http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2006awards/Best_Lemon_1st.j pg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
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Title: Congratulations!!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 01:50 PDT
Comment/Review:
Your story has won First Place for Best Romance Fiction (InuYasha/Kagome) from the Feudal Association. Your award can be found here - http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2006awards/Best_InuKag_Roma nce_Fic_1st.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
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