| "Zuiichi Takara" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silver_Drache [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 17:24 CDT
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I think you did very well in this story, things make sence and it seems to me that you kept the characters in their original character. For example, not having Sesshomaru and Youko jump in the fight, I think that their original characters would wait like you had them do, but Youko would interfer if he believed that he had to so he would be able to later satisfy his curiousity. So I thought you did very well. The only thing I would ask for is if you would please lenghten your chapters. I would appreciate that very much.
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Reviewed By: EnV [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 22:08 CDT
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ummm..so whod she sleep wit? is hiei in this? wats the pairing? is she wit hiei? i hope so..hes the best..lol
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 19, 2005 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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0_0 love it, was a little confusing though, I guess you don't like battle scenes much?
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: September 08, 2005 19:07 CDT
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SPIFFYFULL!!! UPDATE SOON, K?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 16:02 CDT
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well hell lol thats funny plz continue! it's good!
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 19:02 CDT
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I love it!!!! ^-^ Hope to see another update soon! ^_~
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