| "Zuiichi Takara" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Freakhorrorchick On: December 31, 2005 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lov your story!!! Can you please update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 18:33 CST
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Awesome chapter. Really got a look into Kagomes past. update soon please!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 15:57 CST
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wonderful story! one of the only thing you can improve on is updating sooner...
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 14:03 CST
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Little did they know????? Jeeze.. if thats not a cliffy I dont know what is. SO... Youko is jealous of Kuronue, huh? And Sesshomaru is thinking pretty hard about her... Cant wait to see the pairings! Ill be happy no matter what. Multiple pairings much enjoyed ^.^ UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729(nsi) On: November 30, 2005 14:13 CST
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I liked the new chapter, especially the thing about Youko being girly. That was funny. Please update soon! ~DA
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 08:50 CST
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This is a great story and I really hope you update it soon. So I'm guessing that Youko and Sesshomaru took Kagome? What is Kurone, Inuyasha, Kikyo, and Kohaku going to do when they find that Kagome was taken in her dieing state? Also is this going to be a Kagome/Kourone pairing because thats the way it is heading and it would make a good story if you have the two get together. ~DA
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Reviewed By: kougalover123(nsi) On: November 05, 2005 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapters please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: November 05, 2005 11:56 CST
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it's so sad.......
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Reviewed By: Silver_Drache [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 17:24 CDT
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I think you did very well in this story, things make sence and it seems to me that you kept the characters in their original character. For example, not having Sesshomaru and Youko jump in the fight, I think that their original characters would wait like you had them do, but Youko would interfer if he believed that he had to so he would be able to later satisfy his curiousity. So I thought you did very well. The only thing I would ask for is if you would please lenghten your chapters. I would appreciate that very much.
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Reviewed By: EnV [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 22:08 CDT
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ummm..so whod she sleep wit? is hiei in this? wats the pairing? is she wit hiei? i hope so..hes the best..lol
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 19, 2005 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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0_0 love it, was a little confusing though, I guess you don't like battle scenes much?
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: September 08, 2005 19:07 CDT
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SPIFFYFULL!!! UPDATE SOON, K?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 16:02 CDT
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well hell lol thats funny plz continue! it's good!
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 19:02 CDT
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I love it!!!! ^-^ Hope to see another update soon! ^_~
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