| "War Diaries: Adventures Zero-Three" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Custommagnum [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 21:38 EDT
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Well, I don't know what to say. I've been waiting for an update on this for a while and All I can say is that I enjoyed it. Can't wait for an update on the next chapter of this and Neo Digimon.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: ACE117RA [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Story. I am enjoying it alot. Please update and keep up the good work.
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Title: Happy day
Reviewed By: metaletemon27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 12:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At last, an update. I was beginning to think you were dead. But I'd wait ten years for another chapter, Archive, you're that good. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: FruitloopTrooper On: April 28, 2004 09:51 EDT
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Unpaid overtime, huh? I just hope you don't have to work ten to twelve hours days like I do. Anyway, great story, as always. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Dark requiem On: October 19, 2003 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What`s up lord? I want to tell you that I`ve begun to read this and your other fanfics just three weeks ago and I think they`re great, especially the red digivice diaries and this one. Anyone can see that you have put a lot of effort in those two, which turns them into your best works so far and also in some of the best fanfics in mediaminer. Well, there`s nothing left to say except bye for now, and PLEASE update soon¡¡¡
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: July 22, 2003 03:10 EDT
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Here is my question for you ,Lord Archive and please try to answer this question,why don't the digimon foes of the Chosen Children ally themselves with
the Dark seed Children? Of course they would back stab,betry,etc each other later on but togather they are stronger if they work togather.
Here is my question for the D-Arc,why don't you let Ai,Mako and Susy with their digimons take more active role in the Tamers Diaries? |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 00:32 EDT
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All are welcomed at the Diaries Universe Message Board
http://pub62.ezboard.com/bthediariesuniverse
There is a forum that is password protected for authors only, Author's Corner. All other are free for anyone to visit.
Reason why other teams don't do something is A) they have their own concerns to worry about, and B) the Dark Seed children are out of reach by the Odaiba group most of the time, let alone other teams. |
Reviewed By: Lord Leviathan On: July 22, 2003 00:02 EDT
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I was always a being big fan of your.Least now because my passion for digimon is almost gone and the sex get tiring after while(I prefer the action).I just don't how can you write so many fics in the same time.also can we visited your messageboard even if we are not authors?
you also doing a fic about dark seed children.I was wanting for one about dark chosen.I hope you can manage of this fics.
fic question: why not all the chosen ones around the world decide to attack the dark seed children or it's because they hiding in the dark world? Also are they more dark seed children or dark chosen?
by the way, I used to call myself Snake Lord of Chaos.I used to go to megchan messageboard. |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 22:21 EDT
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After Daisuke learned of Hikari sleeping with Takeru his depression caused him to lose the use of his digimentals for a while. In order to regain their ability to armor evolve V-mon, he needed only to demonstrate the trait they are associated with.
Daisuke has more than demonstrated his courage by approaching girls for sexual pleasure.
Daisuke has also demonstrated friendship by defending Takeru against the guys teasing him about being married.
So, yes, Daisuke had lost the ability to use his digimentals, but has also regained their use. |
Reviewed By: Krocket [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Iori finally did one of the major mistakes in War Diaries... Never force your partner to evolve. BTW how did Daisuke in Diaries 17 evolve V-Mon to Fladramon? I thought his Digimentals wouldn't work.
Kyle Evanick. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos On: July 19, 2003 20:41 EDT
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Ack! ok I feel stupid... I just reread the fic and see he did Dark Evolve him into Scorpiomon....
I wonder what Crest Iori's going to gain? Honor?
And whats this...ANOTHER SERIES?! Damn, Lord Archive-sempai...you are one hell of an author to take down this many projects at once...
Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 19, 2003 20:41 EDT
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*nods* Much better. And Chaos? Iori forcing his partener to evolve is what just happened. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos On: July 19, 2003 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Something tells me Iori is dangerously close to forcing his partner to evolve...
Wonder what Crests Iori and the 3rd group will gain... |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 17:40 EDT
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(Smacks head on desk.) Oopsie. Forgot to include some description of the angels actually fighting back.... |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 18, 2003 17:24 EDT
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"Now was that ability lost? If not, could Ken stop the Dark Seed Chosen from being able to Evolve their Partners?"
Think of it this way, it's kind of like all the other abilities Ken had as the Kaiser. In theory he still has access to them. In practice it takes a huge toll on him mentally to try. And the evolution block was for regular evolution. It didn't work against armor evolution, and probably wouldn't work against a dark evolution. |
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