| "Miroku & Kagome continued" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: oh snap
Reviewed By: slayerchic09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the best ending ever.!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: editor version3.0
Reviewed By: moonalchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey sista' i know you'll hate me for the above ratings but hey what can i say i don't like kagome but it is pretty funny. good thing you took my advice and went with inuyasha as the father. hopefully you'll update your lila story. you could really go with not putting your conversations in the paragraphs and actually follow the gramer rules for that. other than that i can't find much to complain about in this fic. i just have a request that you stop here so that this can be the perfect ending. well hope you keep writing. you go sista' -moonalchemist
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Title: u rock!
Reviewed By: slayerchic09 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the part when kagome almost died made me really mad. i think that the dad should be Inuyasha cuz Kagome should not be w/ that perverted monk!
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aha you're back, Aha A plot twist , Aha , AHa...okay i'm done
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry i havent reviewed much my cpu broke so just saying your story ROCKS!!!=)PLEASE REVIEW!!!
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Title: hmm...
Reviewed By: isha_hanyou_20 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 22:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I know, it's sad to review ur own fic, but I thought if there was a review, people wqould read it.
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Title: hmm...
Reviewed By: isha_hanyou_20 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 22:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I know, it's sad to review ur own fic, but I thought if there was a review, people wqould read it.
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