| "Kagome The Devils' Daughter" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: VB On: July 31, 2005 14:38 CDT
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Well in the english episodes he's a guy. I don't know why they did that but now I'll never look at Akito the same ever again. Now I'll be wondering if he really is a she or not. I hope you continue soon though because I'd like to know when Sess finds out and if Inuyasha eventually does.
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Reviewed By: Mysticalflame On: July 31, 2005 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story and I found no overall problems with it. There were a few plot problems, like the demon language, but other than that... I must say that I thought Sesshoumaru was her father, and not her brother, but other than that I've got most of this pretty much figured out. I will wait for another chapter!!!
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Title: Kagome The Devil Daughter
Reviewed By: Dark Soul On: July 31, 2005 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love Your Story!!1 In the English virsion Akito is a male not a girl!!! Please update!
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 03:48 CDT
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Hey i love this story great idea of kag and akito! Heh i think that thats a very good paring considering what kagome is/thinks she is, but man i dont like tohru that much because she was a big happy go lucky jerk and she is very cheesy with her sayings >:) But woohoo!!! I like the brother haha ya!! Kill the bitch!! >:D MWAHAHA PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 12:17 CDT
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Interesting story you have. Oh you mispelled Shigure and Hatori I just wanted to point that out in a helpful way, so please don't yell at me 0.0 . regretfully_yours_cassy_chan is right about Akito being a girl, but I believe that's only in the Japanese manga series (possibly the anime series too, not sure on that). The english anime and (so far) the manga series has Akito as male. Ja ne! ^.^
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't know if you know, but Akito is actually a girl, and shigure falls in love with her in the series in Japan, which continues out there where the series out here ends after a few volumes. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon (not logged in) On: July 11, 2005 11:44 CDT
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I love Fruits basket Inuyasha crossovers! (probably because I never see them) I think your doing a great job! and yeah...Tohru was...ooc but thats okay...I've seen worse xP please keep up the good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: lildevil474 On: July 02, 2005 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooooo great! I really can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Please get the next chapter out soon!!!!
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