| "Vegeta and the Great Pet Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelWendy On: December 04, 2004 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAH XD I laughed so hard i almost cried! Hilaaaarious! Two Thumbs up! (If i had more thumbs they would be raised too)
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Reviewed By: VegetandAru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 01:33 CDT
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wow this is really good you should write another in Vegeta's great adventure series. they're so funny. You should try Vegeta and the great getting a job adventure!
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Reviewed By: Silver Neko (Lazy) On: April 08, 2004 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fun! Dying of laughter! Especially since I'm trying not to wake my family up. . . u.u. I have nothing else to do and I think torturing Vegeta in ways such as this should be a sport. One that would greatly decrease the human population, no less. Hmm. Wait. That's a bad thing. Right? Ah to hell with it, let's let him blow them all up. I'll just be hiding in my bomb shelter now. *Walks off whistling innocently.* P. S. Don't think I'm weird for systematically going through the humor section. Even though I am weird. On second thought, just ignore me. That's probably best.
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Reviewed By: what the fu-? On: October 16, 2003 23:17 CDT
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What the heck? SonKikyo must b on the wacky weed. Either that or they think ur fics really funny, which, by the way, is :) I love it. Your Vegeta Adventures are just Grrrrrrr-eat! Crap, I sound like Tony the Tiger, lol.
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Reviewed By: Vegta Rocks! On: October 16, 2003 23:13 CDT
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My god, girl! That was some funny shyte! I was in a laughing fit to bust at the end where Bra told Vegeta he couldn't see the bird for 2 wks.! HA! FUNNY! I think ur a great authoress, u just need to check on ur grammar, and maybe try to make the endings of ur stories sound more complete. Well, that's my critisizm of the day. Sry, gotta get it out, lol. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha hahhahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!! (Inhales) Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha Vegeta...and...the BIRD!!!!!! Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Frabjousgirl On: March 22, 2003 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I loved the very end! "shit!" lol Poor Veggie but that's why we love him! Great job! |
Reviewed By: amber_waves On: February 04, 2003 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read it... it's hilarious! Way to go! Grandpa? hehehehe, wait til Vegeta hears that one! |
Reviewed By: Panthera tigris [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Lol, you should be proud of yourself, very funny and entertaining. Leep on writing you got the right stuff ^_~
Peace out
Nick |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 20:34 CDT
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O__O |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 20:33 CDT
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You go, Jadedbest! Another masterpiece!
sr |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 20:33 CDT
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You go, Jadedbest! Another masterpiece!
sr |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 20:33 CDT
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You go, Jadedbest! Another masterpiece!
sr |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story keep it coming |
Reviewed By: Queen Noriko On: July 01, 2002 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now we're getting somewhere. For your first G/CC fic you out did yourself. I think I'm going to make a prediction for the next chapter. I see you writing about Videl and gohen because you want to keep the best for last (the B/V chapter) Anyeay, prove me right or prove me wrong, but just get the next chapter out soon PLEASE!! Can't wait until next time. |
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