| "Intergalatic Affairs" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: PlanetStealer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got to tell you that this story is one of the best I have ever read. As everyone else has said I'm glad that this just wasn't a one shot. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Geta-chan On: April 14, 2006 10:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it!Update soon!I wanna know what is going happen next!Is Alina going to die!?
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Title: Can't Wait for More
Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't know you had actually made this into more than a one shot. I'm glab I was just kinda flipping through the stories and found this again. I read this back when you first posted it and I'm glad that you've decided tokeep going with it. I agree with Trynia Merin, it is nice to see Vegeta falling for someone new.
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Title: Good start
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: March 28, 2006 07:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job at Self insertion here. Alina's an interesting character, definately not a Mary Sue. Nice to see Vegeta falling for somone else other than Bulma for a change!
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Reviewed By: Son Faith no Oujo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the coolest self insertion I've read in a while. There is no way this is going to end with just one chapter. Please update soon.
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