| "The cast of the real world" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: black rose 666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 11:46 CDT
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I want to know who came in!!!! please keep it as inu and kag pairing!!!! please!!!!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 08:44 CDT
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WOW nice lemon so please update andlets see who intruded!!! ;)
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Title: The Cast Of The Real World
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 22:46 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome please?
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 10:04 CDT
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UPDATE NOW PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON OR ILL KILL MYSELF!!!(j/k)!!LOL!!=)
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Reviewed By: Kate (not logged in) On: July 15, 2005 04:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got talent. I like the story. The chapters are shorter than most would like, but having written and am in the process of writing fanfics, I know length sometimes is a problem. Not that you don't get your point across, just that you wish it could be longer. I say screw it and just write what you feel. It seems to me it's working. I love your story and your talented skill at the written arts. Update soon. EK!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 23:11 CDT
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OOOOO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!!=)
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Reviewed By: Sexyangelpants [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 21:48 CDT
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I TOATALLY LUV UR STORY SO PLSS UPDATE ASAP!!!
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Title: short
Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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The chapters are short mind making it longer? Its a good idea and I'll see where you take it!
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Reviewed By: MirokuMonk On: July 09, 2005 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALY HOPE YOU WRITE MORE OF THIS IT IS REALY GOOD!
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Reviewed By: star963852 On: July 08, 2005 22:39 CDT
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i love it....sounds like it should be interesting to say the least.... hope that u update soon
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!PLEASE!!!=)
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
got to hand it to you; the idea is definetly origional. its pretty well put together but seems to be loosely put together. the characters are being defined pretty well, though ooc, they need to be for an AU. the problem that i'm seeing is that you are lacking any type of setting description or emotional evaluation of a event, other then for the basic 'damn' or 'oh, she's hot'. its not...deep...i guess. the story has its quality, and i can see this idea spreading off into something really interesting, but you need to get more description and more characterizations. maybe describe the past of the characters or dreams. go into how they feel about the situation. don't rush it and take your time!
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Reviewed By: Megsan On: July 05, 2005 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
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well. I'll keep an open mind and see where it goes...
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 18:32 CDT
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THIS FIC ROX HARD SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!!!=)
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