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Reviewed By: go_die6790 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
theres only one wrod to tell you...WOW! plz plz plz update. i LOVE this story. inu's gonna b suprised at how much power kags has. and from what u have posted up in ur chapters im thinkin that Kags became a relem gardiane...i think. anywho...PLZ update when you can.
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Reviewed By: kaigal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 08:57 CDT
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this is so cool plz update soon i look forward to reading more. *happy dance*
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Reviewed By: Khayen Rose On: July 28, 2005 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and I think that your charater Jade is awsome! Keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sahara Universe On: July 28, 2005 01:35 CDT
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I really like your story I do hope you continue with it. And update regularly that would be really nice of you..lol Well Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Night Walker On: July 22, 2005 07:22 CDT
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What is Hitomi's race? By the way keep up the good work. I really like your charater 'Jade'. I also hope that you will be up dating your story very soon. Good luck with writing the end of what promises to be a very interesting plotline further on.
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Reviewed By: joseph t. On: July 15, 2005 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is excelent and that i hope you will update soon!!
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Reviewed By: inufan625(not logged in) On: July 14, 2005 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do like your fic and I think it has a lot of potential to develop into a great story. I could do with a little intereaction between Kagome and Inu, nothing big yet, but a start would be nice. ANYWAY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
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Reviewed By: InnocentInu118 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you and yes I did enjoy this chapter!!!!!!Thank you sooooo much for this,I really love your story,update again please!!!!!
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Title: Pleeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssse !!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: InnocentInu118 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 15:47 CDT
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HURRY UP PLEASE I know it's only been a day but I can't take it*eye stwitches*HURRY UPDATE NOOOOOOW!!!!
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 04:36 CDT
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hi its me[[again]] lol but i found this song, and i started laughing because it reminded me so much of Jade, its made by Click Five called The Girl here.. She's cold and she's cruel but she knows what she's doing she pushed me in the pool at our last school reunion she laughs at my dreams but i dream about her laughter strange as it seems, she's the one i'm after cause she's bittersweet she knocks me off of my feet and i can't understand why i don't want anyone else she's a mystery she's too much for me but i keep coming back for more she's just the girl i'm looking for she can't keep a secret for more than an hour she runs on a hundred-proof attitude power and the more she ignores me the more i adore her what can i do? i'd do anything for her cause she's bittersweet she knocks me off of my feet and i can't understand why i don't want anyone else she's a mystery she's too much for me but i keep coming back for more she's just the girl i'm looking for the way she see's it's me on her caller ID she won't pick up, she'd rather be alone but i can't give up just yet cause every word she's ever said is still ringing in my head it's still ringing in my head she's cold and she's cruel but she knows what she's doing knows just what to say so my whole day is ruined cause she's bittersweet she knocks me off of my feet and i can't understand why i don't want anyone else she's a mystery she's too much for me but i keep coming back for more she's just the girl i'm looking for haha its like |
Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 03:33 CDT
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The best origanal story ive read yet!! Please update soon!!! im definatly gonna put u in favorites! PLEAE update soon!! This story seems to be going in a jade/sess diection, wander where shes from..? Also love the creative battle and traveling techniques!
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Title: LOOOVVVVE IT!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: InnocentInu118 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story,can't wait till you update!!!!I am so putting you in my favorites!!!!Please hurry and update you're doing a fantastic job!!Do you know what time it is,it's 2:01 am and I'm still replying,now why can't anyone else!
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Reviewed By: meoki On: July 04, 2005 23:40 CDT
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!!!! great writing please tell me that the status is completly wrong! tellme its not over! u've got me sitting here reading for chapter1 to chpater 11 tell me its not over! i mean what about sesshomaru and jade? inuyasha and kagome!? ur writing is great keep up the work and updates please1
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