[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
By: TheBatCat 12/20/24: This story has formatting issues, some typos, and there are aspects of it that make me cringe.
When I first uploaded this elsewhere, I marked it as incomplete, because I had planned to revise it. I never did, apparently.
Definitely plan to in the next year. The first issue I take is Akane digging up Ranma's grave. It's stupid and makes no sense. Cremation is far more common, and it would take someone hours and hours to dig a grave out. There are other ways Akane could discover the secrets she learns that way.
I also want to re-characterize Ryoga, and I need to redo some dialogue. A few of the characters sound goofy when I reread them. Some sections are too wordy, too boring. There isn't nearly enough action. Just needs a good punch-up. Hopefully, it will look different enough that folks will want to re-read.
"... when Ranma Saotome died, there wasn't anyone to take his place."