Wow--what an amazing chapter! The smut was incredible, and tbh I love that there is this new conflict between Bulma and Vegeta. Their relationship has been static for a while, and I think she lets him get away with way too much. Although she refers to him as her quasi-husband/boyfriend, it seems like the only time he shows affection towards her is in bed. I think you developed their relationship really well throughout the story, but at this point something has to give. She used to be the only one who felt confident that Vegeta wouldn't hurt her, and now she doesn't even have that. So what exactly is he offering her and is it worth it? I feel like Vegeta really needs to learn to value Bulma--he has never really had to because she is so laid-back and forgiving. I hope she really makes him work for it--or even breaks up with him (for a while). I have been frantically reading through this epic story over the last few days, and I hope it is continued. You are immensely talented!
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Wow--what an amazing chapter! The smut was incredible, and tbh I love that there is this new conflict between Bulma and Vegeta. Their relationship has been static for a while, and I think she lets him get away with way too much. Although she refers to him as her quasi-husband/boyfriend, it seems like the only time he shows affection towards her is in bed. I think you developed their relationship really well throughout the story, but at this point something has to give. She used to be the only one who felt confident that Vegeta wouldn't hurt her, and now she doesn't even have that. So what exactly is he offering her and is it worth it? I feel like Vegeta really needs to learn to value Bulma--he has never really had to because she is so laid-back and forgiving. I hope she really makes him work for it--or even breaks up with him (for a while). I have been frantically reading through this epic story over the last few days, and I hope it is continued. You are immensely talented!