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I found this to have an outstanding premise and powerful emotional moments though the pacing and dialogue could benefit from some refinement. A bit more polish would make it truly exceptional
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I truly appreciated how it depicts a dark and intense love story between Kagome and Sesshomaru. The narrative effectively explores themes of abuse, forgiveness, and the possibility of finding love after experiencing trauma
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I truly enjoyed that. One of the most memorable moments for me is when Kagome admits her love to Inuyasha beneath the God Tree, and he joyfully reciprocates with a kiss. It’s touching and heartfelt
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I genuinely enjoyed that—a delightful anthology highlighting the tender and playful interactions between Sam and Jack, full of witty exchanges and emotional depth. It’s a heartwarming read for those who adore their relationship
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I truly appreciated that! The most captivating moment for me is when Kagome encounters Axel, and they exchange a blend of humor and heartfelt moments. Axel offers his support after she confides in him about her loneliness.
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I really enjoyed that! One of the standout moments for me is when Kagome observes Inuyasha performing and feels an undeniable pull toward him. It’s a great scene that highlights the beginning of their bond
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I absolutely enjoyed that! It traces Winry’s path through a shadowy, unsettling world filled with sorrow, secrets, and otherworldly obstacles. It’s a poignant and gripping read that holds your attention.
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I thoroughly enjoyed that! The most captivating moment for me is when Kagome senses a presence watching her in the woods, and a silver-white wild dog with glowing eyes appears, silently tracking her
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I really enjoyed that! One of the standout moments is when Inuyasha unexpectedly reveals that Sango is pregnant. It’s surprising, uncomfortable, and sparks all the drama between her and Miroku. It marks a pivotal moment in the story.
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I really liked that! It shows a lot of promise, but the dialogue feels a bit forced, and the pacing could use some tightening. Cutting down on repetition and polishing the writing would make it more captivating.
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I really enjoyed that! The highlight for me is when the group works together to break Naraku's trap, using a blend of Inuyasha's strike, Kagome's arrow, and Sango's weapon. Their collaboration rescues them
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I truly enjoyed that! A standout moment for me is when Sesshomaru gently raises Kagome’s chin, dries her tears, and kisses her, revealing his more tender side—it’s heartfelt and surprising
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I thoroughly enjoyed this narrative where Kagome is rescued by a mysterious half-demon in the Forbidden Forest. Though he initially frightens her, there’s a captivating bond between them. The story skillfully mixes suspense and intrigue
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I thought it was absolutely delightful! The scene that stood out most to me is when Kagome restrains Inuyasha to prevent him from lunging at a doctor, only for him to later discover the "threat" was simply an injection for his illness.
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I found it so entertaining! A standout moment for me is when Kagome spots Jaken in a booster seat—it’s both amusing and endearing
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It’s a delightful and humorous fanfiction where Miroku’s schemes go awry, and Sango hilariously puts him in his place with her sharp wit
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I really like that. One of the moments I love most is when Kagome returns to InuYasha, and he smiles and embraces her. It’s a heartfelt, touching scene
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I really like that it depicts Kagome assisting an injured fox demon, who then transforms into a mysterious girl named Reiken. It’s a peaceful, more subdued moment that emphasizes Kagome’s kindness and adds an element of mystery with Reiken’s sudden …
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I genuinely enjoy that. One of the moments I cherish most is when Kagome hears a song on her way to the funeral, evoking painful memories of parting with her loved ones. It highlights her profound sorrow and emotional turmoil
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I truly value that. The most captivating moment for me is when Sesshomaru rescues a child from snake demons, uses his sword to bring her back to life, and she awakens by attacking him, revealing a peculiar bond
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I genuinely appreciate that. This moment is uproarious and amusing, packed with the band's ridiculous behavior and raw humor. It’s a wild, enjoyable chaos.
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I truly value that. One of the most captivating moments is when Kagome runs into InuYasha and notices his intense gaze and dog ears, sparking a tense yet playful interaction
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I really appreciate that. One of the moments I enjoyed most is when Kagome encounters Sango in the cafeteria. The group's lighthearted atmosphere makes it lively and inviting.
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I truly value that. The story follows Kagome and Sango at a party, where things become uncomfortable for Kagome with a guy. InuYasha steals from a girl but has a change of heart when she pleads for her necklace.
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I deeply appreciate that. For me, the most compelling moment is when Rin fervently begs Sesshomaru to stay after he's hurt, revealing her profound love and bond with him.
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I truly value that. One of the moments I liked most is when Kagome chooses to leave for good, realizing she can no longer assist with the shard search. Her choice surprises everyone, particularly InuYasha
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I truly appreciate that. The scene is straightforward, centered on Sesshomaru and InuYasha's physical longing, with vivid, detailed descriptions and minimal emotional substance
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I genuinely value that. For me, the most captivating moment is when Kagome comes back and reconnects with Miroku and Sango, with a cryptic reference to her past with Miroku that leaves InuYasha puzzled
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I truly appreciated that. One of the moments I loved most is when Ryoma kisses Sakuno by the lake during the fireworks. It's a tender, romantic scene with an enchanting vibe
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I really admired that this narrative follows a group of young individuals as they confront obstacles, loss, and personal growth through play, conflict, and love. It's a story of adventure and resilience