Hehehe, let's see... I've come here looking for another Fan-Fiction Community outside of FF.net. I have no problem with that site, however, I've received no constructive feedback on my writing. I may be remotely decent at throwing a few words together, but I'd like to improve, and I can't do that if everyone's only saying. (Oh wow! So Good!) I mean thanks, but I need a mite of criticism as well here. ;)