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| "Evil Has Friends" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: My Thoughts for chapters 1 through 5
Reviewed By: MyShinjuu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
This crossover was somewhat original. However, I must say that you erally should look into the writings. Do some research, like finding websites or looking into magazines or something. I also think that everything is too bland. You should describe things more and put more feeling into it. You shouldn't interrupt the story with (did I spell that right?), because it's easy to put a (1) and then a note on the bottom of the fiction for it. The characters aren't in character for the most part, and you should include that this happens before Advent Children. The summaries for the chapters at the beginning of each individual chapter are spoilers, and shouldn't be in there. Naraku is the correct spelling. So, you have my ideas, and hopefully you can use them to their fullest. I'm sorry if I appeared rude in anyway, but this is constructive critism, not a flame. For pairings, I think CloudxAeris, TifaxMiroku, CidxSango, InuyashaxKagome. Unless you're into yaoi, then I'd put vincentxCidxCloud, but I don't think you are...*heheh*
| Reviewed By: Kiome-Yasha On: August 23, 2005 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...I really love the story I will like for you to continue and ask for the couple thing I think Cloud should go with Tifa and Inuyasha to go with Kagome! ^_^
| Title: original pairings
Reviewed By: KajiRyu587 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story keep on writing this fic. Here is my thought on pairings Inuyasha/Kagome Miroku/Sango Cloud/Aeris or Tifa(whatever you feel like). Go with these pairings and you will get a lot of good reviews, Especially from me
| Title: Couples
Reviewed By: Coffee On: July 22, 2005 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had a messed up dream where Sephiroth and Sango were together... Ever since then I supported that crossover relationship thingy... Maybe you could put that in where Sephiroth meets Sango in like the woods or something, and he falls in love with her and at the end, when they finaly reach Naraku's castle, Sephiroth turns on Naraku for Sango and he dies... And uh... Then the story does some other stuff that would usualy be a montage in a movie... Oh, and great story!
| Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: cooleo On: July 19, 2005 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make it Cloud+Aeris, miroku+tifa, Vincent+sango, inuyasha+yuffie, Kirara+RedXII, and Kagome+Barret. You may not agree with the Kag/Bar thing but i like the other ppl. Cloud with an old love. Miroku finally being nonperverted and being conciderate. Vincent with his shady past attracts sango with her own problem of her familys death. Inuyasha and yuffie cause their both kind of weird and kind of wild.Kirara and RedXII because their both animals. And last Kagome and Barret cause Barret needs a wife and kagome always needs someone to protect her and barret can do that quickly with his gun.
| Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: dude person On: July 19, 2005 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far. I think its great Aeris is alive. Oh and its Naraku not Noraku or whatever. If that sounded rude sorry. Well im gonna read more of your story now. See you
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