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"...Is Always Attainable" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 02, 2006 01:15 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked it. Kinda open ended but good. You should do more.
 Title: Quiet moment... WOW, THAT LASTED A LONG TIME!
Reviewed By: Choi sama  On: August 10, 2005 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Admitedlly, it's a bit rough and needs editing. You did a good job writing this though, and it shows. I love the way you've got the Naruto-angst down, but I'd have to say he's pretty OOC, especially the dialouge in his head. Well, maybe that's what happens when reading sappy doujinshi. (That's right, right?) I don't think you have to, but if you ever feel so compelled, read over this and make Naruto a little less soft. Sure, he has license to angst and be meditative, and the happy thing is pretty plausible, but the chatter is too normal and sensitive for a tragedy-ravaged idiot.
 Reviewed By: BeeBeez  On: July 16, 2005 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was a v. good read, kudos to you!

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