| "running home" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 18:31 CDT
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PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEee WRITE MORE OR I GO SEVEN TAILED ICE FOX ON YOU yaiyo :)
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Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 19:52 CDT
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i luv this fic (DEATH TO SAKURA!!!) sorry had to type that cuz im having sugary Dr Pepper And I luv the part were Itachi gets attacked by Naruto. Not done readin fic so expect more reviews
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Reviewed By: Norlan4u [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bad Author Update or im sicking an singing Aburame at you *grins Evily* the 7 in overall is due to all the cliffys and the long needed update gimme gimme gimme ^.^
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Reviewed By: Evilkrista [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I gave you a 10 on originality/creativity and a 10 for enjoyment factor imo everything else doesn't matter BUT i give you a big fat 0 on updating -_- *shakes fist* UPDATE i really think that this story had alot of potential!! and I'd like to see more of it.
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Title: enjoyable
Reviewed By: gau ban [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was pretty good. Can't wait to read the next chapter if your writing one.
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 09:56 CDT
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I love your story! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Auroawinter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 06:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
though its been over a year I think since you last updated I just wanted to say that I thourghly (sp?) enjoyed your story so far. I do hope you plan to write more, Im excited to see how the chuunin exams will turn out and how the fight between neji and naruto will go Chrys
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Title: pixie
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome, amazing, uh....WOOOO!!!!! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Honey Sue [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 08:59 CDT
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Yay!!!.....but only one chapter???....awhh....please updated it soon...Gambateh!!!
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Title: WTF?!!?
Reviewed By: demino_hellsin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 07:43 CDT
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I liked the start but dude WTF did you do to the story? it was the only thing that made the bad typing style worth enduring
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Reviewed By: Honey sue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 03:20 CDT
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Its funny but it still cant make me fall off my chair....I really love GAARA!!!...with the paws,tails and ears...its making me wanna squeeze him!!!....i hope there wont be any yaoi...well i really got confused which characters was talking thou....you really should put quotation marks...put some OC in this fic....other teens who have demons inside them(make them girls) same as gaara n naruto....just suggesting....to tell you the truth...i dont really like sasuke n sakura...im really glad you make them bad...lol.....overall i really love it!!!keep up the good work!*Thumbs up*(posing like Gai...lol)please updated it a.s.a.p.....i really really wanna know what happen next....please....okay buhbye!!!..
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Reviewed By: Cayasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to use some quotation marks...it's making it hard to read your story thus contributing to the rating I gave you. Your style I gave a 6 because you don't use quotation marks. Spelling & Grammar you got docked on the grammar portion...proper grammar is to use quotation marks. Originality/Creativity - I have read many stories like this before. Enjoyment - it's hard to enjoy because it's hard to read because you don't use quotations
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Reviewed By: taggerung [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please! wonder what happens when susuke finds out they beat itachi and he can not copy their moves. ^^ the evilness.
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