Title: Hmm... Reviewed By:Bliksem [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 02:34 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 2 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 3 of 10
Comment/Review: While it's an interesting idea, this story is far too short to be all that enjoyable.
Reviewed By: PokeFan97 On: August 06, 2005 01:47 CDT Comment/Review: interesting. very interesting. i'm looking foward to the next chapter. keep up the great work.