| "A Heart Made Of Two Opposites" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2009 20:20 CST
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hoho hope you update soon I can just feel that this will be a Hiei/Kags fic that I will like for once. All the others I've been reading just haven't been catching much of my interest. Also I just loved that last part of chapter "GIVE ME THE SHIKON NO TAMA" by the toad hehe so funny; was great reading with ya
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Reviewed By: EnV [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon!hiei's gonna show up rite?
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 16:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree with everything Ryukotsusei said (ooh, aren't I sooooo creative?)
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Title: my mermiad haten' chicken says hi... bye
Reviewed By: gcdv (nli) On: August 10, 2005 22:48 CDT
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weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!1 hello, this is a really goodstory so far! I love the paring!
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 13:59 CDT
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i like it, but the bold words, and the one big paragraph kinda hurts the eyes. i think that this will be a most interesting story. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 20:35 CDT
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Looks like it could be interesting. The bold is a bit difficult to read with the way the paragraphs are bunched together. You may want to consider changing the formatting to make it easier on the eyes. I look forward to reading more, I love Hiei/Kag stories.
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Reviewed By: Daaige On: August 07, 2005 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it wasn't bad and I would like to see more of the story
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