| "Left At The Altar" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: XxRuler_of_the_DarknessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 20:30 CDT
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T_T Please UpDaTe!!! I love this fic it's awesome!^^
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Reviewed By: Kagomes_nerd On: September 27, 2005 09:02 CDT
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you have done well with this story you have to update soon this is well written and very interesting keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: SurvivalHorror On: September 26, 2005 22:04 CDT
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You really shouldnt make this an Inuyasha/Kagome. I doubt after what she did to him he'll allow her back. You really should pair him off with someone else because if u have him with Kagome, Inuyasha would be an idiot to take her back. Not only did she dump him, but she mated to Kouga and I'm assuming her and Kouga have been intimate. I doubt after all that Inuyasha would take her back, not to mention that he can't anyway since she's mated to Kouga by Demon law. SO please, please don't make this a Inu/Kag. There's too many of those already and your plot is perfect to go off on another pairing
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P On: September 26, 2005 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you made a new chapter.Please update.
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Reviewed By: K_S_Inuyasha On: September 22, 2005 07:51 CDT
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What the Hell did Kagome do that for. I feel very sorry for inuyasha. That was unforgivable, he should have killed Kagome and Koga.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me there is more because if theres not Im going to cry.
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Reviewed By: Ryushi64 On: September 11, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the thought behind this just don't make it easy for her to waltz back since she left him on the alter. plus you might want reconsider him cring infront of all those people. what about their freinds are they going to forgive herif and when she comes back. and since I assume you've got her sexually active with Kouga, she'll be also mated by Youki law. that and many more Questions for you hopefully they help you. Cause some fans want to know. SO DON'T YOU DARE STOP JUST MAKE IT BETTER
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