| "With One Look" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Malik and Bakuras kinky slave [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 16:30 CST
Comment/Review:
AWW! SOO CUTE!! Malik and Ryou are such a cute couple!! Hee-hee! Makes me all giggly!
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Title: huuuuuuuu?Wierd.
Reviewed By: Tea Gardner...Annie!!!! On: October 27, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
UHHHHHH....O.k i really love "whose line is it anyway".But this story is totally pointless considering the fact that it's unupropriate. Soory if i have spelling mistakes.
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: September 26, 2005 13:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was a bit to short for my liking, but it was nice and sweet all the same. I would've liked to see the part where Malik uses the rod to get in a bit more worked out...but I"m just a freak :P
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