| "The Hits Keep Coming" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: May 08, 2010 22:15 CDT
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Squeeee!!!! You wrote another chapter!!! Grrrooan!!! Yotan's in pain!!! There must be more! Please, more, more, more!!! I dearly love this crazy fic.
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Reviewed By: zetsuai2005 On: May 06, 2010 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All through this wonderful story, something has been bothering me. Yohji thinks too much! He rolls everything around on his tongue then flips it up to the gray matter like a cow's second stomach. Where it stays. Now, turning from thinking to action (reference "dick in hand") he's about to learn which one gets him better results. Maybe Aya was thinking, too. Maybe he was thinking that Yohji's attention was only based on the meep, and maybe his was,too. Now that the meep is gone, does he still find himself attracted to Yohji? Would he be pleased to learn that Yohji's meep reaction brought out something that was always there? Action is the word for today. Let's hope it isn't fisticuffs.
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Reviewed By: Darkephoenix nsi On: May 05, 2010 07:26 CDT
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FINALLY!
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Reviewed By: layla-xd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 12:28 CDT
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Oh my, that´s so great...I´m totally in love with the Meep, can I have one too? Pleeeeaaaase? I need it, I really really do! *pleads with big blue chibi eyes* Uhem, anyways, what I wanted to say (besides that I love Meep) is that this fanfiction is wonderful! It´s something new because there are very, very smutty elements (you know what I mean... *drools*), then there is the angsty stuff (what would Weiss Kreuz be without it), the struggling, fighting and denying thing (Aya and Yohji always do that) and such a great humour! I so laughed when Manx called Birman... So you did a awesome job combining this all together into a fascinating fanfiction thanks to your great style of writing! All I can say is: Please continue this soon!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: February 08, 2009 20:29 CST
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No, no, no!!! Bring back the meep! We wants the meep, we wants it!! Waaahh...
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Reviewed By: Caitlebug [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 18:37 CST
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Oh dear god, I was so afraid you'd have Aya leaping at fangirls there for a minute instead of the other way around. *whew* And your aya and yohji's interactions! *fans self* so dynamic and plain out electrifyingly steamy! All I can say is: please aya! Don't run away from yotan! Embrace the love! I implore you!
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Title: hapter 20
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2009 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH I love this, read it all so far in one sitting, not taking time to review until I ran out of chapters (hangs head guiltly) What a wonderful, funny, sexy story so far. I always enjoy a none angst Weiss story (but I love the ones where they suffer too). Very well written, "stand up" applause here for a story well told and definitely making me want MORE Please. AmA aka tutyfrty
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2009 14:30 CST
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"it's all over." ?!? NO!!!!!!!! more yotan! more ayan! more ayan x yotan!
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Reviewed By: Darkephoenix nsi On: February 06, 2009 21:55 CST
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Bwahahahahahaha! That was fabulous, dear.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2009 10:34 CST
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*still laughing* that would be a nightmare of yohji - underage girls! glad to see you're still writing...are we going to get an update soon?
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Reviewed By: Katami Foxxe On: January 31, 2009 03:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear gods! Next chapter now! Do not make me poke at you. That was too funny, KD.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 22:04 CST
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Bwahahahahahahahahahaha! Oh my GODS that was priceless!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: January 28, 2009 17:38 CST
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AAArrrggghhh!! Drool, drool, pant, pant. What is that meeping noise I hear? Seriously, so happy to get another (far too short) tidbit of The Hits Keep Coming. (Despite the terrifying spectacle of lust-crazed, underage, fangirls squealing over their captured assasins. Please, more, please???
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 22:01 CDT
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aha! last to review...somehow or the other this one slipped by my radar...*squee* a yohji chappie! keep it up
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 05:14 CDT
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I so love this fic! I can't wait for another chapter! Keep up the great work and I hope you update soon!
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