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"Watching the Sun" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: the Prince's Jewel  On: March 02, 2006 13:44 CST
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For those not understanding how he died, I shall explain. He was very tired, and hurt, but his physical pain was nothing to his emotional pain. He always did like watching the sun from the bottom of the pool - and he chose to die doing something he enjoyed. Breathing underwater isn't a real good idea if you don't plan to die.
 Title: Great
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 25, 2006 10:10 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I KNOW IT WAS GOKU. Anyway, great story, but sad...But I don't exactly know how he died...from the injuries or what? It's my best guess...
 Title: Confused a bit...
Reviewed By: megan1202 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 02, 2005 22:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Maybe I'm just slow because I'm sick, but I'm confused. Did he kill himself? The thing about the water above his head, did he drown himself? I'm really confused. Still well written though.

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