Title: FFRG Review Reviewed By:Mileniua [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 17:11 CST Comment/Review: I was rather disapointed when I read this first chapter. It certainly doen't make me want to read any farther... First of all, you spelled viewer "veiwer" and the commercial before anything really happens was a turn off. Try reworking this chapter before you get any farther in the fic.