Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
its....interesting.but not to sound bad or anything, but do you not kno quotation marks? It wouldn't hurt to use them, ya kn what i mean??. All tho i would like to kno what else happen, but please use quotation for it to seems more intersting, instead of jus a bunch of words that are only seperated by fullstops or questio marks. Oh yea, I just had to say that i love when inuyasha insults koga,i have kno pity for koga.Why should i any way, he abviously doesn't have any problem callin inuyasha names.Nice story, like a siad,it jus need some work
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