| "One Good Party" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: copycat_capycot On: February 06, 2007 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, not bad at all! Actually, I really like it! You should do a sequel. Please?
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Title: Pixie
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shakes fist* You write so well!
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Reviewed By: Jessyrocks15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!! Keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: FranklinBe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. I think you should continue where you left off instead of going like 12 years into the future. It would be really interesting. Keep up the great work though. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: HellHoundBreath [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 12:14 CST
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You chose name the name I suggested. Hmm^^ *tries to stay calm* This kinda reminds me of the time of of my buds said she pregnant with one of the teacher's baby.^^' Anyway, I think a sequal will be great. I love your stories.
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Title: Anticipation
Reviewed By: Kikilo_Lea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 12:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Hurry up and update before I die of aniticipation. Great chapter! Finally Sakura will have the baby! ^.^
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Reviewed By: HellHoundBreath [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 13:13 CST
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Yea, thanks for leaving me out here...WAITING!*hangs on cliff*I'll just patiently wait here.*starts reading a book*...God, why does everyone leave me on the climax?
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Reviewed By: sharingan216 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 01:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ey nice job u update quick too. umm as for names if its a grl how bout Reina( ray na) and a boy umm kizuki ( key zu key)
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Reviewed By: HellHoundBreath [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*been drinking* Ooh, If it's a girl, Gina... 'cause it means silver and silver is prettyful! If a boy, I agree with BananaGurlieGurlDude, there. Think about how'll it sound, Haruno Haru! LMAOF!
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Title: Cool.
Reviewed By: Kikilo_Lea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! This is a really good story. And your spelling and grammer is almost perfect! Anyway, I think the baby should be a girl and her name is Rei.
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Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 14:24 CST
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I really like your story so far, ^_^! As for the names - for a girl I would choose Tani, and for a boy, I would choose Haru ... so yeah. Please update soon; this is a really original story idea! ~Banana Gurl
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