| "Forgotten Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: raykay [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the end of ch.4 was cute. i hope you update and soon. good luck with the rest of our story. if you don't update may hell eat your soul.
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Reviewed By: 2HOT4U On: June 05, 2006 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it (lol) plz update soon ok!!!!!! or i'll hunt u down!!!!!>< (jk)
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Reviewed By: super shinobi woman!!! On: March 25, 2006 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!! this is a great story!!! i think u should make the chappies a little longer, but jill be fine as long as u update soon :)
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Reviewed By: Lola_bunny On: March 17, 2006 07:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SO COOL! Please continue the story!
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Title: please
Reviewed By: kunai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 03:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update it was super good
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