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| "Clearly Drawn Battle Lines" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Catofhope [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet this story rox PLEASE PLEASE update soon
| Title: kawaii!
Reviewed By: yorume On: March 24, 2006 05:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
well,,,,you have a unique plot on the story,,,well i mean it sounds like kinda in the future with all the technology and the cars and most of the fic that i read usually either stick to the original ninja 'thing' than putting it on alternate world or somthing like that,,,and the fact that you used kakasaku and sasusaku pairing makes it more interesting for me,,,i read a lot of kakasaku fic,,,since they are my favorite,but most of them are angst which is sometimes or just depending whoever reads it feels that the story will get boring,,,i hope you're story wont end up like that,,,not too much angst,,, i like the way you start your story so i hope you finished it since i've been checking here for MONTHS if you already wrote the second chapter or so,,well,,dont get dissapointed on the reviews and stop writing the story,, i believe there's a lot of people out there who read your fic already but just lazy to put reviews,, please finish your story and write more kakasaku XD)
| Title: eh!!!
Reviewed By: yorume On: January 26, 2006 00:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the plot of the story was cool,it was thrilling,,,just when i'm starting to get excited on what will happened next,, it was cut,, is that right? i hope you start working on it because it look's interesting to me and i would love to check here every week to see if your going to finish the story...... please finish the story so i can read it!!!!!
| Title: superb
Reviewed By: Plastic Spoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story line. its good. as some sort of profesinal would say *clears throat*....'you have potential'. lol. but seriously the story is good. cant wait for the next chapter.
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