| "Close to You" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Anani On: March 26, 2007 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic! Continue onward please!^^x
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Reviewed By: wanderingHimuralover On: December 28, 2006 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That rocked! I loved it! sooooooo sweet! two thumbs way up!
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Yuugi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 17:15 CST
Comment/Review:
First off, I want to commend you on how you have that feel of the first-person narrative. It really shows more emotion and thought on the character's plot. However, the inserted dialouge flashbacks in between paragraphs are kind of confusing and would sound better if woven into the story. You also have some minor typos and punctuation errors, but I also noticed many fragments as well. The story also tends to be a little repetitive. Overall though, I enjoyed the story and would like to see more work from you when I read on my own time. Thank you for submitting your story to the FFARG!
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Reviewed By: Nette JP [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 03:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHHHHHH!!! That was sooo sad!! But man was it good!! That was such a cute little fic but to bad it had to end soo sad!! I thought that you did great though!! Truely loved it!!
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