| "New Student." Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: wanderer guy On: February 10, 2006 17:16 CST
Comment/Review:
It's okay but i think 'bobby' as a ninja is stronger than he should be as if he's someone who can beat everyone, like a cheat code for a game where your invinceible and no one can kill you. It's fun for a while but it get's boring just standing in front of a door shooting bad guys for 10 minutes
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Reviewed By: wanderer guy On: February 10, 2006 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's okay but i think 'bobby' as a ninja is stronger than he should be as if he's someone who can beat everyone, like a cheat code for a game where your invinceible and no one can kill you. It's fun for a while but it get's boring just standing in front of a door shooting bad guys for 10 minutes
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Title: W/e
Reviewed By: Goldragoon On: January 23, 2006 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well Bobby u over did it but NICE.... am wating for ur NEXT story u ass so.. CMON GET ROLLIN >=)GOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOOGGOO go get it u tiger lol.. anyways my chars in it ^^ and my whore!!! lol
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Title: New Student
Reviewed By: DarknessReader [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 14:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Since i can't rate my OWN story, i want you guys to do it for me, It's my first fan-fic so i forgot a few "i Dont own Naruto or any of it stuff" so...sorry
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