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| "FAKE in Love: Act XVII, Murder and Mayhem" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2013 14:20 EDT
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Here's some e-ffection! ;) Don't feel like a review-whore, I guess all writers want reviews, me included. Hm, speaking about my "favourite scene" in all your Acts, I seriously can't choose. There was so much enjoyable stuff already, and who knows what will happen in the following stories! :) By the way, I like Erin and his endless trying to make Ryo his, teehee. But I love it when Ryo or Dee punch him for it, too. xD Okay, I'm off to the next Act, see you there! :) | Reviewed By: jdr1184 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the bits with soon to burst Dee Dee and JJ's love is starting to grown on me. I still miss the pouncing. Oh, Bikky crack about wanting to be back on the streets hurt, but it's very true of the age. I love that even in his anger he saw that Ryo was upset. I might be in the minority but I love having Erin around; someone has to fill the slimy role. Now I want a guy to hit on Dee. Jealous Ryo is adorable.
| Title: Some E-ffection
Reviewed By: Bruce1618 On: May 26, 2007 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course, it says to leave a rating, but it never tells you whether or not 10 is the best or 1 is. *shrugs* I'm saying 10 is. I can't believe I waited until now to start reading this series. It's fantastic. It's creative and fun and I love all the jokes in it. Dee and Ryo are true to character and watching their relationship grow and change is such a pleasure. Of course, the smexy lemons are definitely a plus, but that's not all there is to it. There's substance and plot. Great job! I'm also loving that in the lemons neither one have been designated as seme or uke...it's nice to have both of them just giving to each other without all that crap. Labels are so annoying. Anyhoo! Keep up the fantastic writing! I look forward to whatever you do next.
| Title: Great Job~!
Reviewed By: Lin~chan On: September 02, 2006 02:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've spent the last 2 days reading pretty much all of your fanfiction. Its absolutely amazing and I just wanted to let you know. The characterization is superb, you've really captured the character's and how they interact with each other perfectly. You have some amazingly well crafted plots as well, and I've loved how the characters have developed and grown as time has passed. I would have emailed you this review, but couldn't get your email as I don't own an account on mediaminer. You're a very talented writer! -lemohr1@gmail.com
| Title: Amazing At 18
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GD - this is your 18 fic in this arc, 19 for FAKE, and yet again, you have blown me away as a reader. You've been an active participant in the FAKE fanfic world for the past year now, and just like a bottle of the finest wine, your stories simply keep getting better with age. And just like the finest of wines, the flavour of your writing becomes finer, better and more fragrant over time. This last arc had some wonderful hidden treasures within; Dee's flashback to his feelings about shooting someone, the realization that Bikky is now officially a teenager, Ryo's reactions to Marsh being put up for possible release. All very in character, while taking our beloved boys in new and different directions. I don't know how you manage to keep doing it, but 19 FAKE tales into this, and never once do I read a story of yours and think "Oh, I've read this before" or "How boring." You have kept the world of FAKE exciting and engaging for all of us fans, and if anything, I only want more and more. As always, update soon. As a reader, I trust you completely, and CAN'T WAIT to see where you'll take us next. XO - Blue
| Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 18:52 EDT
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Well, it's taken just over a week, but I've officially made it through all of FAKE in Love. I think it's wonderful and you've really got some fantastic ideas (and steamy ones, too!). I'm certainly looking forward to more. I think your characterizations are honest and accurate, I love the affection the characters have for one another and that's it's not all contention and angst all of the time. There are some really wonderful humorous moments throughout. Keep up the great work!
| Reviewed By: ketall On: April 06, 2006 21:23 EDT
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I love your characterization of all of the characters, especially Dee and Ryo. So many authors make them incredibly OOC and I'm glad you didn't. Anyway, I've read all of the stories in your series and I'm eager for more.
| Reviewed By: Starfallvaltash On: March 30, 2006 02:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally finished them all I love the way you've rounded out a lot of the characters and still kept the feel of them from the managas. Would absolutely, positively enjoy reading more =)
| Reviewed By: Almne On: March 29, 2006 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your stories and have been steadily working through them. I really like the character development and the fact that you don't just ignore all of the other characters in the series. Smex is great, I love your scenes, but smex with PLOT is even better.
| Reviewed By: April Watson On: March 23, 2006 15:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, you are The Best FAKE writer ever. I absoloutely love your writing style and the way you make the characters what they are. You are very talented and I always love reading more from you. And out of the characters you've added, I like Erin. I would love to see more moments with him. I don't know. For some reason I like it when there's a character that tries to get in the way of Dee and Ryo, but never succeeds. Keep writing more, please! If there's any FAKE writer that gets my love, it's you!
| Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Aacire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 23:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Since you're feeling neglected here is a review from me! First off I'd like to say wow! I just finished this reading this one, and yes I did read all of them in the series! It took me a while , but I have just finshed! I love each of these stories for the suspense and depth of the characters emotions and inner termoil! Some parts have made me laugh and I think that is great! I like to see charcter developement and I'm seeing that here these stories! I feel bad for Ryo and Dee when it comes to Bikky! He's becoming a teenager and they have to learn to handle it! I bet Bikky would take back that "I wish I still lived on the street,..." comment if something happen to Ryo or Dee! I know that you read this alot, but here it comes again, update soon! Just think of it as a request from a fan! Till then Asta!
| Reviewed By: GarnetKoryu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 12:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey what's up! I want to say here and now that you are the best fanfic author i've ever found, I love your work and I read very religiously. I've reccomended you to all my "FAKE" friends and they love you too...they're kinda crazy too-they worishp you(a little maniacly)I don't always leave you a review...But I try to.I think I have revied every fic you've posted and in your defense I'ld like to get very mad for you. It is NOT hard for some one to take out 5 freakin' of their day to write a review...I should know,all of my time is sucked up by oter things-practice, work, school,etc...i can only read like 1 ch @ a time but i still do...not always(sometimes i froget, but i try...Anywaysi think it's bull that you don't get all the love you deserve cuz you're just great...got ta go now..but as always lots of love GarnetKoryu.
| Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: March 16, 2006 19:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am always glad to see when you post another story. I really enjoyed seeing how you can put these characters through so much but still keep them like the characters we know and love. Now when you ask about which is our fav. act I have to go with... In Another Life (pt.1) I just fell in,love with it. I know that proberly sounds weird but it is a story that I can read everyday. Even though I know what is going on I still can't pull away. Thank you Grumpy Demon for writing awesome stories that keep us the readers wanting more.
| Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 15:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, worth the wait! What more can be said.
| Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 14:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always I absolutely love your work. The channerler is totally brilliant.
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