| "Project IY14" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Title: woot
Reviewed By: YokoKuramaLover On: April 05, 2009 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutley love this fanfic. very rarely do you find good alternate universe fics, especially with sesshoumaru and rin being the main characters (they my fave so yea). keep up the good work. plz hurry and make new chapters, its been forever since you have and i really want to see some new things. plz dont tell me youve given up. anywho goodjob and plz hurry and make more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: that hohoho person is weird On: May 25, 2007 12:35 CDT
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wow you no that hohohoho person sounds alot like me!? but you so have to ud that story is so asome
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Reviewed By: FREIKN UPDATE ALREADY On: May 25, 2007 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man thats such an asome story you have got to update more often man(not calling you a man) so come on and put the new chapter up already!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HOHOHOHOHOHOHO On: March 27, 2007 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
comeon frekin UPDATE already for crying outlound you take way to long but on teh other hand asome story amazing stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KarmaKat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 00:28 CST
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This story is so much fun! I hope you update soon.
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Title: begging
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: December 05, 2006 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY!!!! I HAVE BEEN WAITING AND WAITING FOR AN UPDATE!!! CONSTANTLY CHECKING FOR THE ALL TOO WAITED NEW CHAPTERS!!! PLEASE!! PLEASE!! PLEASE!! PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dreamy sigh. This last chapter is as perfect as any of the others. I love the interplay between Sango and Miroku, I adore the twists presented with Kohaku's nightmares, and Sango's memories. The insight into Miroku and his struggles to regain the skills he lost after being amputated...wow, you are GOOD. I truly regret that there is not more. That is the main problem with fanfiction...not enough chapters for the voracious reader. (subtle hint...ah, fork subtlety...please gawd in heaven above UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE) This has provided me with so much fodder to feed on...my own plot bunnies are now multiplying at a delightful rate. Thank you. I might just have to go and update my own AU sci-fi fic. There are so few of them, and I adore them. It has been months since you updated, though I'm going now to comb through the other fansites to see if maybe you updated there and not here...lol. All I know is that I am delighted by this story, and eager very eager for more! So if you haven't updated, PLEASE PLEASE ON HANDS AND KNEES BEGGING, please update! I know school has probably started again and you are probably busy as all smack, but this has got to be one of the best stories I have ever read. It's up for IYFanguild, and has passed the seconds...that's where I stumbled across it. I am definitely thirding it and you have my vote pinned. Take care and I hope to gawds that you get some time or inspiration to continue this wonderfully complex story. Thanks, Fate
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Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 12:01 CDT
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Oh, this was so..damn...so emotive. I'm wiping tears out of my eyes, and I can absolutely see how Sess is clinging to Rin for dear life and insanity. Fate PS - Damn this is good.
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Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 11:51 CDT
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Yet another wonderful chapter. I love how you integrated the Kazaana's attributes of eating back the flesh from the palm out, named it for a "fairytale' monk's ordeal, and now Miroku has a prosthetic arm. I wonder, by using the pure youkai healing abilities Kagura mentioned in the last chapter, if Miroku's arm could be restored? Hmmmm.... Fate
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Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I am loving your attention to detail! I love how you added that history about the torture of the Nazi's, the prison guards and the 'Internment of 2220'. I find it hilarious that Naraku is answering to Kagura, instead of the other way around. They are both quite in character. Fate
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Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 11:29 CDT
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I am positively flooding you with reviews, but I am so delighted by this story that I can't help but comment. =) Your writing is amazing! I have already gone from giggles to tears from chapter to chapter, but this one had me doing both. That scene between Rin and Sesshoumaru, when he lightly grips her hand, oh that was so poignant! I adored it, and was sniffing back tears over a happy little stupid smile. Oh it was WAFFy and lovely and I even sighed with contentment...only to choke later at the look on Miroku's face, 'as if he had been caught stealing Sango's bra'. Oh, that one had me on the floor laughing. I almost sprayed coffee all over my monitor...you should warn a girl before hitting her upside the head with a funny. I wouldn't have just taken a sip of coffee and I wouldn't have been choking and wheezing and trying not to chortle. Oh, that was a good one! Holy snot, I am in love with this story! Man oh man I hope you update soon, as I already checked and it's been a few months. *sob* Ah, well, I still have a few more chapters I get to wallow in before I run out... Fate
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Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 11:11 CDT
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Okay, this chapter had me laughing out loud. I can just see the elegant Taiyoukai---thunk!---wince---banging his head on the upper part of that storage slot. And then, of course, his impetuous brother must follow in his footsteps, thunk. LOLOLOLOLOL I wonder if Inuyasha is IY7? Though he seems to think he is not a full hanyou. Curiosity roused. That last part with the low-cut top for Sango, haha! Wonder if it will work? (Skipping off to go read more...) Fate
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Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 10:44 CDT
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The tears are falling now. So much emotion! Poor Sesshoumaru! Damn Naraku and his twisted self. Damn. Damn damn damn damn damn. Fate
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is awesome! I had to toss in a word about this chapter. It had tears in my eyes. Poor Sesshoumaru. To see such a proud being subjected to things he can't even understand, caged like an animal for the mere benefit of "science". Damn. You are exceptional. Fate
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Reviewed By: nyaa On: October 25, 2006 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I hope you haven't given up on this! You have such great imagination, I'd be really sad if you stopped here. The whole idea for this fic is so unique, and it's too great to be abandoned! Please, please, keep up the great work!
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