| "An Unexpected Ending" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 13:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't stop writing everything u are good in. okay that was bad of mee. well i hope u will update soon even if it is a year since last time so go on
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tries to hold in laughter*I realy like this story,but I find people tend*giggle*to forget to put that their story is also a comedy.Please continue when you can.*starts laughing for a short time* So.Funny.HeHe.
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Title: ...uh...???
Reviewed By: Ilove_Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story...pesonaly i think this stories goen great! Please keep writting... if you don't i guss i'm gonna have to write 2 more reviews(lol) N-E-Ways...gotta go...see ya!
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Reviewed By: haku120 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'ts ok just put spaces in between them talking and thinking it was very confusing
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Title: ????
Reviewed By: Jessiemushashi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story for Inuyasha lovers To tell you the truth it is.....kind a boring OMG!!!!! LOL C ya gurl
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Title: ....um
Reviewed By: flufy_maru_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sorry for the harsh rating but this story needs a lot of work, to me it has no pulse...(shrugs shoulders) especially the third chapter it's lame it reminds me of every other inu/kags fic...love and gushy ness....well i'll give you some advice...1. make you're chapters longer, 2. put some personality in it. 3. try not to make it so normal, give it some action cause to me it's just lame. i may not know how you feel about my fics (if u've read) but i really don't care. just update more. i'm working currently to be a novilest and my grammer sucks ass! so i'm not perfect either. so not to sound harsh or mean to you but try to make it better. don't change the story plot (i like it ^_^) just add more action k? no hard feelings right? ^.* i will be checking this fic just so u know...it's been added to my favs only because i'm monitoring it...happy writing
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Reviewed By: demoncatkuroro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh the aww-ness! update!
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