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| "At the End of the Tunnel" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It's very well written and you caught the original story's spirit really well.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 21:59 CST
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As before, this is an impressive work, one Neil Gaiman himself would respect. Still, I would like to see more of an update. Do you have a 5th chapter written after all these months? If you do, please post it, your story so far is impressive. So, please update soon. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 12:22 CDT
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Cool to see an update. First point I'd like to make is that even desire never drops that many hints to past events (talking about the Desire bit, where Dream blamed desire for the change in love interest by the Oan woman, that even Desire would never do, s/he'd be too, well secretive, as Desire). However, I love having the update, and I love taking a deeper look at this story again. Thanks for proving me right about my assumptions, and thanks again for the update. Later
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 22:41 CST
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Sorry I didn't review this unusal little number sooner, but I saw it a few months back, during the summer, and I admit, it caught my eye, I just wasn't ready to read anything sandman yet. Of course, what you wish Ranma to do was shown pretty thoroughly by foreshadowing first. 'One who flows with the world around them, unbending in that strange wave, one who incarnates...' well, I leave the last bit to you to conclude, should be obvious. My gift to you, if you choose to accept it, and conclude this tale of interest. I will say this. This is not a Gaiman story, but a tale of yours. Please, show this to Neil Gaiman on his website, it could be aadjusted, and written and illustrated into a unique tale, without ranma as the protagonist. It would be an interesting thing to read, ya know? Not to mention read this tale as well. Well, later.
| Reviewed By: TehJai On: June 22, 2006 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really getting into this fic! I have to admit I was a little cautious at first, being as I am, rather the perfectionist, but this is really a great fic! It's getting really interesting and I'm intruiged by what's going to happen next. Would I be right in guessing that Ranma is going to take over Destruction's place as Daniel Hall did Dream's? 'Cos that's the feeling I'm getting from this. Bravo, anyways, and keep it up! I'll chek back agian for updates! -J
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