| "Dolphin's Five" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Need more now
Reviewed By: chibimina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 02:51 CDT
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Hey, where is the next chapter I want to read more of this fic soon. I love the interaction of the Gundam boys and the Naruto world. Please more Asap...
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 09:41 CDT
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Lol well your beliefs are your own and as for Iruka getting some balls. He needs them! Lol. Can't wait to read more of your fic so update soon please!
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Reviewed By: SanadaSayuri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 18:21 CDT
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Yay for the update! I look forward to reading more!
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Title: Swwweeeeet!!!
Reviewed By: Honebarluv On: August 24, 2006 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah this is sooo fun. (puppy eye attack) Pleeease say you have more of this lined up. pleeeease!!! 0_0
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Reviewed By: annette On: July 10, 2006 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this fic. I hope that you continue with it.
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, you updated!!!!! Love it!!! How powerful is DUo compared to the natives? Who's approaching? More soon please!!!!
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Reviewed By: 'Tsuki On: June 23, 2006 02:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A most unusual and entertaining crossover. you have managed to make the characters accessible for someone who has never seen Naruto and that takes a goodly amount of skill. Please upload another chapter soon. 'Tsuki
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Title: Heh heh. Duo's funny
Reviewed By: Ryushi Nigami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 09:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story. I seriously love they way you characterised Duo. And, of course, leaving an original way for Duo and the rest of the Dolphin gang to meet with Team 7 (it was also quite original). Congrats and please update.
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Reviewed By: kirallie couldn't be bothered to sign in On: May 17, 2006 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please, please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such a great start!!!
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Duo as a ninja is neat! Guess the others will learn their lesson, do not touch someone doing seals. Can't wait for more on thsi and your HPYYH one!!!!! Thanks for your reviews of mine!!!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 21:38 CDT
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Four pilots? Where is the fifth? Who is missing? It's an interesting question, and it puzzles me to know who you left out. I can think of atleast one reason why each pilot would not come to Naruto's world, and therefore I am eager to know who you choose to stay behind. Or, if writing 'four' instead of 'five' was an accident and you plan on having all five of them there. Then again, there is the possibility that you did that on purpose and have a plan for that missing pilot. There are just too many ideas that could fit within this little teaser. I look forward to the next chapter so I might understand what is happening. Keepp going! This is great! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Asaka_sama(logged in) On: May 05, 2006 18:13 CDT
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Well, this seems to be off to a good start! Love the mysterious ending. I think your writing needs refining, but overall you're doing really well. Congrats and keep writing!
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