| "I Slipped [Tenten x Neji]" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Southdakotaboy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 10:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. It could have used more scene developement, but overall I would read more of your work.
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Reviewed By: Shippos_sister_Kuzume [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
ahh! So Kawaii! you should definitely make a sequel! I love reading fanfics like this! -^^- Excellent job!
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Reviewed By: Panda__ On: January 20, 2007 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfiction is fantastic. You've captured their personality, I couldn't sense any OOC-ness! I loved the way you wrote Neji's point of view. Great job!
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Title: Sequal
Reviewed By: go_80906 On: June 13, 2006 14:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its a cute story. I would enjoy it if you mde a sequal.
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Reviewed By: kitsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 13:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
SOO KAWAII!!!!!!! i love them together! good job. Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: xxmokonaxx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it! I think you should really make a sequal!
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Reviewed By: AJ On: May 31, 2006 06:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
awww that was cute. they make such a cute pair!
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