| "Two loves, one Heart..." Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Two loves, one Heart
Reviewed By: nightshade41230 On: June 22, 2008 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story and I hope you finish it very soon
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: ShopaholicDancer On: November 06, 2007 14:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you should continue your awsome tastical story! I hate it when great authors write great stories then dont write anymore. so in short loved it and update.
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Title: please continue ^_^
Reviewed By: Ketsuke On: March 15, 2007 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue the story!!!! it is the best one so far out of the 129-150 storys i've read on here and fanfiction.com *gets on hands and knees*so......PLEASE CONTINUE!!! if u get a chance that is......^^
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Title: good job xD
Reviewed By: Ketsuke On: March 15, 2007 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u rock!!! i'm not a good writer, but i enjoyed ur story. i hope u will continue the story, because it would be a shame to leave one unfinished. if u want to contact me i have a myspace and a page at the fanfiction site, just so u know. and yes my nick name at both are Ketsuke, i'm the one and only! (if u have a myspace look under http://www.myspace.com/alyssa_inuyasha) ^_^ hope u continue the story, ur fan, Ketsuke.
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Reviewed By: sesshy'struelove On: November 25, 2006 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
brilliant1 but a cliffy plz update
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Reviewed By: sweetness92490 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your story!! please update soon!!
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Title: good work
Reviewed By: Story Tellers On: June 28, 2006 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is quite a good story and I would really like to see the next chapter. I hope there will be more scenes with bothe of them. I just love the fics with Sessh.
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Reviewed By: Kogas_woman21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 20:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like your story so i hope u update soon
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Reviewed By: Shiori_Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 09:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
HA,HA,HA this is the fith revew now you have to update soon HA,HA,HA UPDATE SOON please one of your fans.....
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Reviewed By: Shiori_Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 09:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon or else ....................................................................... I will be vary sad..
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Reviewed By: Shiori_Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 09:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
thats good. you need to make your chapters longer then a page or two. lol that she burned sessh's hand and not narak's hands... update soon...
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I hope you decide to continue with it! Besides I wanna see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: goodgirljay On: June 16, 2006 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like this story. its so cool . i hope u get ur five reviews cuz i really want you to contiune. acutally hope u get more than five cuz ur fic deserves it.
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Reviewed By: Be-Jeweled [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 12:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay why in the world did you post the entire story in the chapter summary box? You're only supposed to give a little summary about the chapter if you want, not put the entire chapter in there. That's waste of space since you're going to post it again on the page. Some people are so clueless, I mean the box says "chapter summary" not "post entire chapter here".
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Reviewed By: heavens_angle On: June 02, 2006 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i like your story update soon ...you got a few grammer and punuaction mistakes but easliy fixable. good idea base and please continue soon!!
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