| "Within the Pale White Light" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 08:25 CDT
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Hey I love this story, but when are you gonna update it? It's an awesome mother fucking tale, but why is it you never posted another chapter? I think a lot of people would appreciate an update. So, do so, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: wolf-of-black-flames-kikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this story in fact I have been looking for one like for over a year now please hurry and write some more JA~NA
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Title: PLEASE!
Reviewed By: dororokun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE TO MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER, I CANT STAND IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: Yushi_Yami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 19:55 CDT
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If you want a beta: "Ooh, ooh! Pick me! Pick me!" XD
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Title: w00t!
Reviewed By: Yushi_Yami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 19:53 CDT
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Holy! How come this hasn't been updated in a year?!?! T-T I love this fanfic... Pleeeeeease update it! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE! With sugar, cherries, chocolate sauce, and pocky on top!!!! Update this! I pretty much read the whole thing nonstop since I've found it, and I reeeeaaally want to see it continue! It's totally brilliant! (I'm begging at this point -_-;) Update this fic!
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Reviewed By: guitarfanatic531 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great and very original! Odd at first but well done and it shows a lot of creativity. I hope to see more chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: Blissfulrain [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story please keep writing. I'm not a big fan of halo but this story makes it a lot more interesting. I also saw your fan art for this story and I thought those were great.
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Reviewed By: Sharktooth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story butlike most fanfics it has been abandonded
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Reviewed By: DeathRaptor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story but it seems to be abandoned but ill still leave a review really interesting ive never seen anything like this so i decided to check it out and read read all the chapters in one day i was sad when there were no more chapters so im gonna keep checking back on this hoping for an update
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I guess this is just one more I can add to the 'abandoned' pile. Damn.
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Reviewed By: AlixNix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story, I've never played Halo though, so it was a bit confusing. I like the idea of Naruto crossing over with a sci-fi. :)
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 13:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! What's going on with this one? Please don't tell me you've given up. It's too good not to finish.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Hyrulehalfbreed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Has to keep going!!
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Reviewed By: AuronX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done a great job with fixing up your spelling and grammer. That alone has made your story far easier to read. The charater development is interesting, leaving just enough to the imagination and making me wonder what's going to come next. I think I'll have my eyes on Naruto and Gaara for the next little while, and I can't wait to see where things go with Keyes now that she's hooked up with Gaara and Temari. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 20:17 CDT
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HAHAHAHAHA!!! I couldn't help but burst out laughing there in the end!! That was great, and i am freaking so excited. I can't wait to read more. I'm completely hooked on this story!!
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