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Title: WHY DID YOU STOP?!?!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: December 03, 2008 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Two, upcoming three years and you wrote one chapter! And of course it was a chapter with a cliff hanger like THAT!!! I am amazed. You captured my attention, got me all excited and im left looking for the next chapter butten muttering "Itsgottabehereitsgottabehereitsgottabehere..." It seemes your another gifted author who has forsaken the readers, and im so fustrated I could cry. It was beautifully written and I do sincerly hope that you come back to it. Please dont take my review as harsh if I have managed to make it sound that way, but im sure you've been on the reciving end of a "dead author with a brillent story". Im sure MANY people know where im coming from ^^' But I digress, do please continue this should you ever find yourself looking at it again. Till then~
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Reviewed By: OreSama On: February 01, 2008 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wha~ next chapter~!!!! i love your style, for some reason, both the plot and the way you worded your story just kept me reading until the end. beautiful. can't wait for the nexy chapter~!!!
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Reviewed By: sammiescruff [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 14:36 CST
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NEXT CHAPTER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: beautiful start
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 15:29 CDT
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This my dear is a beautiful start to another story, I look forward to it. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 00:34 CDT
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This was a great idea, I loved it. I can relate to Naruto though, I'm 19, but I'm a scrawny guy, so I tend to be mistaken for a younger age, most of the time around 15 or 16, it really sux. Anyway, Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon.
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Reviewed By: NaruXSasu fan On: April 24, 2007 10:21 CDT
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more!!! It's awesome!! I hope you update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: narutofreak On: December 31, 2006 12:49 CST
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Interesting looking forward to the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you made my friend squeal thus you must continue or i will die...
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Reviewed By: Iamdifficult [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good......but why won't you update....? Whatever......I hope you do soon.
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Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay more that is good so far
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 15:07 CDT
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i need 2 know what happens. i kinda already do, but i wanna know if it will turn in2 a serious relationship. so, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon!
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Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH why did you stop it was getting good...:( jk keep up the good work kk
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Reviewed By: tret On: August 01, 2006 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, I can't wait for more! It's like crack! Whee! I hope there's lemon. I guess it would be weird if there wasn't the way the first chapter ended.
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Reviewed By: Nomistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: cinta On: July 23, 2006 23:56 CDT
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GREAT STORY! you should start with a lemon in the next chapter...the hard one...I think. you know I don't really like to wait but I'll wait for it, so...update soon! ;>
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