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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 23:31 CDT
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ummmm where is the epilogue??? but it is great so far.. i just want to see what happens...
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 20:36 CDT
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Your right what you wrote was a first. Never have I seen that done before. Awesome Job. But I STILL think Kikyou both in life and death was not so innocent .. Ithink she was just concieded but.. oh well..Your story was Great!
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Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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ooo, very angsty! ^^ Inuyasha hasn't exactly been clear but he's showed some of his feelings to Kag. The epilogue should clear everything up though. I've never seen someone use the shinidamachu that way and I can honestly say it's surprising no one has ever given them deeper thought seeing as how they are constantly around Kikyou. I've always wondered how she formed a relationship with them since that is left out in the anime. I didn't pay enough attention to see if it was in the manga, I should go back and look. Either way, it was nice to see that creativity at work. I only wish your story was longer but everything has to come to an end. More description and attention to detail could make your story even better than it already is. I do hope you finish it! You've done a good job thus far and should be proud of your work. ^^ P.S. I have to admit, I prefer writing that's a little more on the mature/adult side but this was pleasant and fun to read nonetheless. ;)
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Reviewed By: BlueDayDreamer678 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 12:30 CDT
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OHHHH!! Way cute!!! Great chapter!!! Please continue!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: August 20, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I may be repeating my self but I really love this sweetfic. Well done LW. You do such a wondeful job on the InuYasha/Kagome fics. Are you a professional in the writing industry or is this just a really talented hobby? I would like to see you do a fic where one of them lose their memory. That plotline always has lots of potential angst and fluff. Thank you for sharing, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: w_j (not signed in) On: August 20, 2006 21:23 CDT
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Amazing as always. I love your interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha. I'm very much looking forward to the epilogue and hoping for a lemon. Inuyasha is a baka, but let's hope he gets it all right in the end. :)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. At long last Kagome tells Inu tho he can be such a baka sometimes. Loved the bit with Miroku too...he reminds me of that battery bunny,,,he just goin and goin, lmao....:D Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: inubaby26 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 17:09 CDT
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please update this tory really really soon. i can't wait to find out what happens next! :)
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Reviewed By: anime RuLeS u all [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 23:46 CDT
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awesome!! i cant wait for the next chapter!! its gonna get good!!
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Reviewed By: wackywisher On: July 22, 2006 13:51 CDT
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yeah! Kag is ok, and Inu has finally got his head on straight!! can't wait for the next chappie!!!
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Reviewed By: k car On: July 17, 2006 14:21 CDT
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Wow. To be honest, I didn't know anyone was still writing Inuyasha fanfiction! I've been reading it for ages, but only the old stuff. I only recently re-discovered Media Miner, and I'm glad to see that at least one wonderful writer is still going! This story is very unique, which in and of itself is impressive. I just read a couple of your other stories, too, and I'm already becoming a fan =) By the way... I'm not sure if you read the manga too, or just watch the anime, but if you haven't read the very latest chapters, you might want to... it's an interesting twist.
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Reviewed By: wackywisher On: July 15, 2006 23:38 CDT
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I hope INu's wish comes true!
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Reviewed By: YangofYin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 23:54 CDT
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Wow!! That was pretty darn original. I've never seen this take done before! So, my question is, if he chose Kagome, the youkai would give Kagome back her soul or she would use Kagome's soul instead of Kikyo's? Sorry...I'm slow. >.< This is getting really interesting. I hope his wish won't backfire, like Kagome returns back to her time sans Inuyasha. Or something that dramatic like, but knowing you, the Queen of Angst, I won't be surprised! *lol* One little thing, you might want to go back and edit later, you some word omissions. Nothing major, if you want me to point them out, me emails on my page. ^_^ -Yang
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great Story!!! Please update soon!!!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I dont think Ive read one like it. I liked how you kept the doppelganger changing back and forth, tyring its best to confuze InuYasha. I like this alot. Update when you can.
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