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| "Karerui no Hana: The Wilting Flower" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 00:18 CDT
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he could have taken tensaiga and... or not. ♠ actually he gave her a merciful peace although i don't exactly believe in euthanasia it is a very japanese/buddhist cultural norm (at least in the past), it didn't seem to be his intention. he seemed rather petty. ♠ this was rather dark and tragic. ♠ thank you, ginny
| Reviewed By: Saholia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe he killed her. But it is in-character, good job! Very angsty and great imagery!
| Reviewed By: critical eyes On: August 20, 2006 10:10 CDT
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Your story is absolutely wonderful. I don´t need to say anything else because I totally agree with Mujitsu who is one of my favourite authors.
| Title: Nicely done
Reviewed By: Mujitsu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I opened this warily, I must admit. Usually I stray away from titles that I can't understand (maybe you should put the english translation into the title as well), but I was very gratified to find out that you have great talent. Yes, while there were a few spelling errors (common in most fanfictions), your style of writing was above many fanfictions I have read in the past weeks. Your descriptions of the emotions that are running through the air were very poetic and does the scene justice. And the line Sesshoumaru says about the wilting flower, I at first thought was corny, but then I really looked into it and imagined him, and I could make it work. It was a very poignant moment between the two of them. I honestly was not expecting him to kill her, thinking that this was just like every other fanfiction, so thank you for proving to me that you do not necessarily mold to the standards of the world aka the ridiculously enormous masses of fanfiction readers. While I do not think that Sesshoumaru would ever truly kill Kagome because of something Inuyasha did, I realize that you needed that element to make the story work. All in all, I was entertained and my mind was stimulated. Usually I'm left looking at the screen in a blank stupor, wondering how some of society could have fallen so far. Thank you for writing this. Mujitsu
| Reviewed By: Inu-yame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 13:57 CDT
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please indent the story is kinda heard to read
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