Reviewed By:animeluver4-evr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 17:59 CST Comment/Review: i agree! it's pretty cool but you need to make them a little longer and spread the wording out a bit it was hard for me to stay on the same line. Other than that it was awesome and i think it was good.
Reviewed By:FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 17:58 CDT Comment/Review: Not a bad Fanfic. I reccomend (Hope I spelled it righ) that you keep writing. But a suggestion would be to make it a little longer but keep with your tone.