| "Eyes of a Hunter" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: ElliesDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god... This was just... wow. I mean I just didn't want to stop reading... simply masterful.
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Title: Sess and Kagome are naughty
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So when will Sess meet up with Inu and find Kagoms's scent on him? Or will Kagome see him at work and realize who he is? Hmmm... Do you have a beta? The grammar is a bit rough - like using paste for pace as in pacing the room and a few other wrong words - looks like spell checker screw-ups. Gotta love spell checkers. Anyway, keep up the story, I'm sure there is a good one in there after all the sex (not that we mind it). :)
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Title: Please keep updating!
Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(nsi) On: January 17, 2007 18:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! Great story soo far! Its awsome, though if u want ny ideas on where to take the story next... i got some, its up to u tho....I think that this time or..after they have made a routine of this sex in the park thing they should figure out who eachother is. maybe sess will give kags a promotion and make her his main secretary to keep her closer, also.......if u want to make it more, dramatic u could have them get a mix up and sess thinks kag picks inu over him and she really loves him but thinks he dont like her or something then sess could have kag once everything is cleared up making her the payback for inu going under sess on that business deal....buuuut there are loooots of ideas!!! theres just two! have fun and keep it up! PLEASE!!! btw....is kag gonna turn youkai?? jus curious.....i like that soo i wanted to kno....ny ways please update!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 23:37 CST
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Wow, just wow. You definitely have written an insatiable intensity into these two and I love it! It's so primal. i'm going to sulk now about how unfair it is that Kagome gets all the Sess meat to herself;( Fooey. Great chapter. I look forward to more;) Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Princess Tiger Lilly [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 22:14 CST
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Damn, girl, that is hot hot hot! I don't even _like_ Sess/Kag pairing, but I can't help it - your writing is too too good!
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Reviewed By: Princess Tiger Lilly [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 21:44 CST
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very enjoyable! not every one can write lemons so well you forget that you're reading - hot! very hot! chapter 4 appears to be the wrong story line, tho.
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again i am so pleased by your writing style. I hope you do decide to continue it
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Reviewed By: LUCIA517 On: January 04, 2007 02:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this storry on a different sight but know it's gone. I found it to be so good I put it on my favorite list. I hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: 946 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heyyy, Keep going!! I'm interested to see where this goes =Pp~
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Title: Eyes Of A Hunter
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, screw those kids who don't know how to review. We, adults, know that you give praise where it is deserved and you deserve it. I think that you have a great thing going here, it's definitely steamy, seeped in some mentioning of Sess's history, and I'm just glad I'm not Kagome because I would have gone mental already, lol. Keep up your writing, it's fantastic, and more than anything thanks for sharing with those of us who appreciate your time spent!
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Reviewed By: serendith_ On: November 27, 2006 09:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Your writing is fantastic ... I hope you continue!
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Reviewed By: ALLY Girl On: November 20, 2006 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great piece. I hope that you continue with it. Keep up the good work.
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Title: I UNDERSTAND
Reviewed By: MOST INTERESTING On: October 31, 2006 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU MEAN. I WROTE TWO FICS AND DIDN'T HARDLY GOT REVIEWS. FOR YOU THOUGH YOU ARE CREATIVE, AND I THINK THAT YOU SHOULD CONTINUE WITH YOUR WRITING AND BUILD UP PRACTICE WITH THIS. BECAUSE YOU COULD BE A WRITER. I DON'T MEAN THE CHEESY ROMANCE NOVEL CRAP BUT IT COULD BE SOMETHING MORE SPECTACULAR. I AM NOT WRITING THIS TO MAKE YOU WRITE MORE, I AM JUST SAYING THAT IT TAKES REAL WILL POWER TO WRITE FICTION AND IT SUCKS THAT NO ONE REVIEWS ANYMORE CHARMANDER
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 23:59 CST
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I still really love this story. Good job on it. Is this the end or will there be more where that came from?
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