| "Eyes of a Hunter" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess Tiger Lilly [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 21:44 CST
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very enjoyable! not every one can write lemons so well you forget that you're reading - hot! very hot! chapter 4 appears to be the wrong story line, tho.
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again i am so pleased by your writing style. I hope you do decide to continue it
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Reviewed By: LUCIA517 On: January 04, 2007 02:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this storry on a different sight but know it's gone. I found it to be so good I put it on my favorite list. I hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: 946 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heyyy, Keep going!! I'm interested to see where this goes =Pp~
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Title: Eyes Of A Hunter
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey, screw those kids who don't know how to review. We, adults, know that you give praise where it is deserved and you deserve it. I think that you have a great thing going here, it's definitely steamy, seeped in some mentioning of Sess's history, and I'm just glad I'm not Kagome because I would have gone mental already, lol. Keep up your writing, it's fantastic, and more than anything thanks for sharing with those of us who appreciate your time spent!
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Reviewed By: serendith_ On: November 27, 2006 09:38 CST
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Your writing is fantastic ... I hope you continue!
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Reviewed By: ALLY Girl On: November 20, 2006 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great piece. I hope that you continue with it. Keep up the good work.
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Title: I UNDERSTAND
Reviewed By: MOST INTERESTING On: October 31, 2006 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU MEAN. I WROTE TWO FICS AND DIDN'T HARDLY GOT REVIEWS. FOR YOU THOUGH YOU ARE CREATIVE, AND I THINK THAT YOU SHOULD CONTINUE WITH YOUR WRITING AND BUILD UP PRACTICE WITH THIS. BECAUSE YOU COULD BE A WRITER. I DON'T MEAN THE CHEESY ROMANCE NOVEL CRAP BUT IT COULD BE SOMETHING MORE SPECTACULAR. I AM NOT WRITING THIS TO MAKE YOU WRITE MORE, I AM JUST SAYING THAT IT TAKES REAL WILL POWER TO WRITE FICTION AND IT SUCKS THAT NO ONE REVIEWS ANYMORE CHARMANDER
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 23:59 CST
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I still really love this story. Good job on it. Is this the end or will there be more where that came from?
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Title: Very Sexy
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting start, can't wait to see where you go with this. Happy writing.
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Title: Eyes of a Hunter
Reviewed By: Sylla On: September 15, 2006 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do enjoy this story and would enjoy a lot more if you continue, so PLEASE!!!!! continue!
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 11:13 CDT
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i like it would be interesting to see where you go with it so please update~*~
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: August 23, 2006 07:42 CDT
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An interesting setup just a few questions (take or leave as you may) 1. Shouldn't Kagome be a little more familiar / relaxed in the park? It was closer to what she had known in the past. Therefore she should have known the sounds. 2. Why didn't Kagome recognize that she was dealing with a demon? (there should have been demon energy though you don't mention it) She had seen the red eyes and he called her nigan (sp) a couple of times. That should have tipped her off and her reaction should have been along the lines of purification. (Unless she has some how lost her powers) She has always hit a problem head on before (perhaps a bit foolishly before) Anyhow it is a good start to a story and I hope you write more soon
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Squee. Very good. I must have more PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE. Is it bad I find so much enjoyment out of it? LoL Very good writing, I like your style. ^^
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