| "The Truth Hurts...in a good sorta way." Reviews/Comments [ 204 ] |
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Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 20:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter! Great work, looking forward to the rest of the story!!
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 20:00 PST
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I would love to help Sess-chan with his hair! He has such pretty hair. InuYasha too. And a few other demons in a few other animes! LOL I can't help it I love long hair. This was a great chapter, and I can't wait for you to update! Until next time, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Sasori26 On: November 08, 2006 19:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a reall great story, but why does the status say completed? Its not finished yet is it?
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 18:30 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Another great chapter! I don't know how you do it. Can't believe Sess insisting on her bathing once (or twice) a day so he can "whack off in the bushes." This look into the the Great Taiyoukai is going to color my thoughts during every other fanfic I read about him. Can't believe she said no to his question about wanting to see him bathe. Isn't she supposed to be truthful? Guess the effects of the flowers really are wearing off, huh? She didn't even make the observation that she thought he was preening in the moonlight because he really thought he was "Kami's gift to women." Ha! Completely love his reaction to her revelation about the flowers -- "You have cramps. Congratulations." Too, too funny! Darn! Now that I've read this chapter, I have to wait for the next one. Darn, darn, darn, darn, darn.
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 18:22 PST
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Maybe I'm somehow twisted, but I thought this chapter was sooo sweet. You never do what I expect. I like that. This was really deep ...introspective even. Very nice. Thank you for writing it.
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Title: ch 7-8
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 14:08 PST
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I was laughing so hard I had a hard time staying quiet... I was reading this at school with people trying to study all around me. :sigh: Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 20:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, okay, okay! Uncle! Mercy! I don't know how much more I can take. I laughed so hard, I had tears rolling down my face when Sess flexed his butt at her. Can I pay you to come to the next party I throw? Because I swear you have to be the most entertaining person alive. What a contest! When she mentioned being from the future and he started to wonder about what advances they might have made, I was wondering if she would tell him they had battery-operated devices that made the man (or demon, as the case may be) completely optional. How would he have taken that bit of news? Again, the evolution of his thoughts and feelings is so well-done. I especially love it that you're updating so regularly. I was looking forward to reading this all day. Can't wait for the next installment!!
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: November 07, 2006 16:13 PST
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LOL.... But.... ewwwww..... I don't blame him. I'm a girl and I would kill if JAKEN touched me.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: November 07, 2006 05:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i am going to die laughing! jaken gay! honestly should have seen that coming, but still some stuff right there. and the whole innuendo thing with sessy, mean but hilarious! keep up the great work, i'll be around to see how you continue this :D
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 03:33 PST
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Oh, so funny! It is SUCH a shame Sess isn't infected by that flower, because if he had told about that encounter with Jaken out loud .... I would have DIED laughing! And I'm still giggling over Sess as such a voyeur -- who knew? And, really: still baiting her to make her have dirty thoughts? Feeding his ego. I really like this look underneath the surface of the great Taiyoukai. This is so incredibly clever. I just can't wait for the next installment!
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Reviewed By: amhor56 On: November 06, 2006 22:23 PST
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HEHEHEHE!!! getting good! Sesshoumaru is hilarious! Making all those comments. Dear my! Please update soon. Both chapters were great.
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Reviewed By: RhiannonoftheMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 21:28 PST
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Ew! Ew ew ew ew ew! Bad Jaken indeed! What did he even hope to accomplish? Jaken is so small and Sesshomaru is so...well...big! You know what? Nevermind. I don't even want to know - too many nasty mental images, there. Great chapter! Sesshou's last innuedno reminded me of a line from an old Mel Brooks film: "Do I have any openings that this man might fill?" Love it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 20:22 PST
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That is going down in my book as the best battle cry ever! Nothing phycs your opponent out more than confessing just how scared you are. Seriously though, that one actally made me laugh out loud and that doesn't happen often. Well done.
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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lol please update I couldnt stop laughing
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Title: love
Reviewed By: cassie06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 19:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how sesshy is like a father to rin! hehe.. GOD kaogme has a dirty mind.although when he said "ride my beast" the same thought popped into my head..lol.but..cool beanS!. i have been to caught up in your story to write chapter 2 of my own fan fic.. love your work.. not a fan of the cursing tho...but still love it
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