| "The Truth Hurts...in a good sorta way." Reviews/Comments [ 204 ] |
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 13:57 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved every word! I will never watch another cooking show in the same way again. I, too, was disappointed that he didn't have a spatula when he walked in the bedroom. And where can I buy a demon bed like that one? Shame on her -- of course she should face up to her responsibility if she took his virginity. I think that had to be the MOST embarrassing question the Taiyoukai had EVER been asked. Oh, if only Inuyasha could have heard it! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you will include a scene wrapping things up with Inu at the end. Can't wait for an explanation to him of what all happened. This has been a never-ending joyride! Looking forward to the rest of this story and then your NEXT one!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 13:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow hmmmmm....*S*
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Title: weee!
Reviewed By: kagomemiko123 On: November 26, 2006 19:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! now sesshomaru just did that! without rin noticing! you sooooo have to UPDATE!
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Title: 16-17
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 13:50 PST
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wow, kagome does some pretty um, ... interesting things when she is angry. the way you ended chapter 16 was inspired. Does kagome actually think Sesshoumaru will be content with "being even"?? Heh, I look forward to more ^_^
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 10:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One hand job at a time....too cute. Keep writing doing a wonderful job
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 08:03 PST
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Another great chapter. I can't wait for the next one! I love how Sess-chan came up with the idea of cornering her when she couldn't get away and she wouldn't cause a scene because of Rin. Well I hope you update soon. Until next time ja ne!
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Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 02:50 PST
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omg I can't wait for the next chapter!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 00:54 PST
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hee hee!
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 00:12 PST
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Oh Gawd. "Look! Rin!" as a human shield. You've obviously done this before. Me too; not a real quick thinker. It is effective though. Very picturesque (sp?) chapter, and of course I laughed out loud in the middle of the night starting with 'gift' and continuing on and on. ^-^
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Reviewed By: sweetness92490 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 23:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was genius!! man i HAVE to read the next chapter!! i love this story!!
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Title: KIMBA COOL
Reviewed By: terest [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 13:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant believe that. that was halarious, can't wait for you next chapter. please update soon. I LOVE THIS STORY
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 12:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was so wrong lol
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 12:01 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was great! Bad boy Sess was wonderful. I can't wait to read more! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead On: November 23, 2006 23:42 PST
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". . .One hand job at a time." Thats possibly the best thing I've heard ALL this Thanksgiving day. Graaah I hope you write more soon, I love this fic.
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Reviewed By: Fried deer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 12:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this chapter! Especially the end^_~ Overall I really like this original storyline you've got, and the Characters don't seem out of character and therefore makes the story kinda believeable (well as much as a fanfic can anyway) So all in all: Keep up the splendid work, and I'll be looking forward to the next update^_^
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