Reviewed By: Phoenix Hoshika [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 05:00 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: Are you okay? (fishing for flames and all) Your idea was fun, but the grammar could use some work. Sorry, no flame just quick honest criticism.
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