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| "Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Creepy
Reviewed By: Nekomew78 On: December 15, 2006 12:28 CST
Comment/Review:
No seriously, thats all I have to say, creepy!
| Reviewed By: Rusalka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 15:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice work! You did a great job in setting the mood, and the description made the terror she felt seem almost real. I noticed a few errors here and there that I'm guessing were probably just typos. You may want to look over your stories a few more times before submitting them in the future. Aside from that, I also noticed you using the word "and" at the start of sentences, even when it wasn't necessary. It just looks strange when the sentence would have made sense without it, that's all. Anyway, I really enjoyed this story, and I look forward to more works from you. Keep up the good work!
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