| "Red Blood - Blue Stone" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on girl!! Bring on the sequel! *shakes you* XD
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Title: DAMMMM
Reviewed By: Mo0fin On: July 11, 2007 10:20 CDT
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KIKI FTW WHY THE HECK DO YOU HAFTA LEAVE? Why the heck are you not allowed on the compy? You need to continue this please. xD Because I have no knowledge of Rina whatsoever, or what should happen. ((HEHE, SASUKESASUKE! o.O)) But yeah. Why so long? D: Oh, btw, do you wanna come watch HP with me? XDDD
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Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 15:49 CDT
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I don't think so. I've got today with it... ;_; Maybe in...sayyyy...Three years. ._.
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Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 12:59 CDT
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O.O NOOO, will you ever get it back?
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Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 13:19 CDT
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Alright: On my OWN account this time ^^ GREAT JOB! Please make with the sequel!
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Reviewed By: Blank Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 13:16 CDT
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Oh yeah--Sorry, I forgot I was on my friends account, this is Manga Girl *sweatdrop*
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Reviewed By: Blank Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 13:15 CDT
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. . . *strangles you* OMFG HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO US!!! Please don't sick Al and the tomatoe on me T-T I'll keep writing! Poor Al...I wish rooting for him too *bites hankie*
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Reviewed By: Xxx Khalida xxX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 19:21 CDT
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awww poor Al! OMFG smack write that damn sequal(shut the hell i know i cant spell)...ya thats it ...sequal,now!
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Title: CONTINUE
Reviewed By: Mo0fin On: June 23, 2007 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue more Kiki. xD I thought some of the most new chapters were a little rushed compared to the rp version but whatever. x)
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Title: hey kiki
Reviewed By: Xxx Khalida xxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 18:12 CDT
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hey you im editing all sixteen chapters of red blood blue stone for you...nothing else to do. i love this fan fic aswell as military branch! ya! im new here and i hope you write more chapters soon...or ill get you...jk i love you!...im not bi!!!!!
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Title: A Fine Read
Reviewed By: SkippingAlice [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"One: I have not based the story on anyone." In your response to Electric_Sapphire, you said, ' I have not based the story on anyone.' That's not what she meant; she meant that you are writing the story through the view of a female OC--something a lot of people find overly annoying with FMA stories. I too, a lot of times, find this annoying; if done poorly. I first began reading this kind of story because of an author called Manga Girl, through her I was suggested this story, and another called, 'Emmaline Mathews'. I'll admit that at first I was a little adamant about this story, but I gave it a try and found that it wasn't bad. It does have grammar and punctuation mistakes--easy to look beyond. You've done a fine job with this story and for that I praise you, I hope you continue writing. Kudos--SkippingAlice.
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Title: Chapter Sixteen
Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arg! How cruel! Please, everyone please review so updates will come! *cries*
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Title: Chapter Fifteen
Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a sweet chapter! Guilt/Rage forever! XD
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Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! An update--great to see you back on your feet again, great chapter!
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Title: ILU
Reviewed By: Muffinplease On: May 13, 2007 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ RIGHT MUR PLZ THNKS Lol for n00b speak. :D
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